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Mar 5 2008, 09:20 PMQUOTE Author's Note: Okay, so lyke allz u people are not reviewing or reading. I mean seriously, I am wrighting thsi for yous. I do this for YOU!
THIS IS NOT FOR ME BUT FOR YOU!!! how will I be beter if I not get review. I wouldnot't. So pleaze help! Also, I my friendz think that my story is too structured and stuff so I thought I would go do another direction. Chapter 18: Blood Room One: Mother won't open the room blood around me don't talk just listen. Two: Raven...go home your child is waiting with Zelda. "Zelda?" I ask. "Yes Zelda." Three: Look. YOU DON"T LOVE MY PIKACHU!! GIVE ME PIKACHU!! Mudkip? Liekz MUDKIP!!! Four: I am in a room. Dark. Dark. GAMMA TAKE AWAY THE PAIN! YOU MAKE ME FEEL TINGLY!!! Baby....baby....baby.... Oh no! I think bunny ate my shoe. Five "You can't have my manga!" I said with a voice that voiced. "But I am here to help!" Mom said with a voice that voiced like blood. "NO!" MANGA LIFE BABY!!! Six Her long hair hit my face as she was on top of me. I felt her on my quivering flesh as I felt her on me. It was so good. Warm and nice. Her breasts heaved with each thrust. I liked her nipples and they taste like chocolate. I like chocolate with nuts in them. "Mom?" "Baby?" Seven No light. Grandpa is gone. Eight. The end. ------------------------------------------------------ Or is it? Song: (Sing like Quintin Taratino) Help me momma I am so sad, My baby in my belly makes me mad Please don't go I need it bad Help me moooommmaaaaa I am so sad Help life is liek a pickled juice in a cup of ivery that no one picks up because pickle juice is gross Her hair flies like most Maybe I should the grapes and eat it with some butter and toast. Help life is like a pickled juice in a cup of ivery that no one picks up because pickle juice is gross Nine: I thought may be life should be going on but then I realized now I don't have baby. Oh mom, take away my bum baby. Naruto...I love you "Stop, you are a monkey" It was true...I was a monkey. Ten: As a monkey I roamed the country side of the jungle until I found billy. Billy kissed my lips and I as a princess in a robe. She carressed me. I am in love wit the princess. ELEVEN!!!! GO TO HELL CHARLIE AND YOU DIES!!!! ----------------------- That is the end of chapter. I thought that making it vague would allow people to interpret it their own way. I hope you like it. PLEASE REVIEW OR I WILL COME AND FIND OYU AND BEAT YOU DOWN! -------------------- “It is I” (said she) “who give wisdom to infants and idiots; by me children grow wiser than their parents, by me beaux become politicians, and schoolboys judges of philosophy; by me sophisters debate and conclude upon the depths of knowledge; and coffee-house wits, instinct by me, can correct an author's style, and display his minutest errors, without understanding a syllable of his matter or his language; by me striplings spend their judgment, as they do their estate, before it comes into their hands. It is I who have deposed wit and knowledge from their empire over poetry, and advanced myself in their stead." -The Goddess Criticism from Battle of the Books by Johnathan Swift
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