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> Billy and the Magic Wish, Part 18
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post Mar 5 2008, 09:20 PM
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Author's Note: Okay, so lyke allz u people are not reviewing or reading. I mean seriously, I am wrighting thsi for yous. I do this for YOU!
THIS IS NOT FOR ME BUT FOR YOU!!! how will I be beter if I not get review. I wouldnot't. So pleaze help! Also, I my friendz think that my story
is too structured and stuff so I thought I would go do another direction.


Chapter 18: Blood Room

One:

Mother won't open the room blood around me don't talk just listen.

Two:

Raven...go home your child is waiting with Zelda.

"Zelda?" I ask.

"Yes Zelda."

Three:

Look. YOU DON"T LOVE MY PIKACHU!! GIVE ME PIKACHU!!

Mudkip?

Liekz MUDKIP!!!

Four:

I am in a room. Dark. Dark. GAMMA TAKE AWAY THE PAIN! YOU MAKE ME FEEL TINGLY!!!

Baby....baby....baby....

Oh no! I think bunny ate my shoe.

Five

"You can't have my manga!" I said with a voice that voiced.

"But I am here to help!" Mom said with a voice that voiced like blood.

"NO!" MANGA LIFE BABY!!!

Six

Her long hair hit my face as she was on top of me.
I felt her on my quivering flesh as I felt her on me.
It was so good. Warm and nice. Her breasts heaved
with each thrust. I liked her nipples and they
taste like chocolate. I like chocolate with nuts in them.

"Mom?"
"Baby?"

Seven

No light. Grandpa is gone.

Eight.

The end.

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Or is it?

Song:
(Sing like Quintin Taratino)

Help me momma I am so sad,
My baby in my belly makes me mad
Please don't go I need it bad
Help me moooommmaaaaa I am so sad

Help life is liek a pickled juice in a cup of ivery that no one picks up because pickle juice is gross
Her hair flies like most
Maybe I should the grapes and eat it with some butter and toast.
Help life is like a pickled juice in a cup of ivery that no one picks up because pickle juice is gross




Nine:

I thought may be life should be going on but then I realized now
I don't have baby. Oh mom, take away my bum baby. Naruto...I love you

"Stop, you are a monkey"

It was true...I was a monkey.


Ten:


As a monkey I roamed the country side of the jungle until
I found billy. Billy kissed my lips and I as a princess in a robe.
She carressed me. I am in love wit the princess.


ELEVEN!!!!

GO TO HELL CHARLIE AND YOU DIES!!!!



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That is the end of chapter. I thought that making it vague would allow people to interpret it their own way. I hope you like it.

PLEASE REVIEW OR I WILL COME AND FIND OYU AND BEAT YOU DOWN!


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“It is I” (said she) “who give wisdom to infants and idiots; by me children grow wiser than their parents, by me beaux become politicians, and schoolboys judges of philosophy; by me sophisters debate and conclude upon the depths of knowledge; and coffee-house wits, instinct by me, can correct an author's style, and display his minutest errors, without understanding a syllable of his matter or his language; by me striplings spend their judgment, as they do their estate, before it comes into their hands. It is I who have deposed wit and knowledge from their empire over poetry, and advanced myself in their stead." -The Goddess Criticism from Battle of the Books by Johnathan Swift
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