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post May 3 2012, 03:08 PM
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Ladies and gentlemen...

Boys and girls...

Children of all ages...

IT'S HERE!

http://www.cloudscratcher.com

The first ten pages are online for your viewing pleasure. Not this Friday, but every Friday after that a batch of new pages will be added! The other pages on the site will be coming in following updates, as well! Until then, enjoy the first 10 pages of chapter 1! No more delays, folks! CLOUDSCRATCHER IS HERE!

Tell your friends! In the coming months, I'll be doing what I can to advertise, as well!


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post May 3 2012, 03:21 PM
Bookmarked. Looking forward to more!


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post May 3 2012, 03:22 PM
Love it.

I like that there are different types of clouds - makes things interesting. So many possibilities for future aerial battles...


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post May 3 2012, 03:31 PM
Hoo, boy, this is one webcomic (besides Homestuck) I'm gonna follow!

Not enough stuff out there with good old fashioned aerial battles, in my opinion. Loving the art style, too!


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post May 3 2012, 03:40 PM
Aha, at last!

The pages look really nice. If I had to nitpick, the colored "tails" of the planes on page 6 are too dark. They're almost the same color as the planes themselves, which looks weird.

Congratulations on finally getting this started!


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post May 3 2012, 03:40 PM
I couldn't help but laugh when that one guy sunk into the red cloud. "So soft!"

Why does the second panel of this page have no background though? Felt a little jarring.

Can't wait to see the next pages.

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post May 3 2012, 04:10 PM
You got a great start. The grayscale characters on the logo don't quite mesh with the colored parts. Maybe some color on them could help.


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post May 3 2012, 04:26 PM
They're sepia-toned. Like 30's era photographs.

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Aha, at last!

The pages look really nice. If I had to nitpick, the colored "tails" of the planes on page 6 are too dark. They're almost the same color as the planes themselves, which looks weird.

Congratulations on finally getting this started!


They are the same color.


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post May 3 2012, 05:19 PM
Nice. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.


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post May 3 2012, 05:45 PM
Nice job Shmecks!

The red cloud gag was hilarious!


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post May 3 2012, 06:32 PM
And on that day, the world was changed forever...

Also, not to "me too" all over the launch party, but as I (sort of) mentioned in the "Happenings of the Day" thread, I was helping Shmeckie get the actual site up and loaded and running for the vast majority of the day, so I guess I'm the de facto "webmaster" for Cloudscratcher.

All the coding and functionality and what not is kind of my area, so if there's anything that looks off or doesn't work or broken let me know and I'll fix it up as best I can.

On that note, quit your job, grab a meatball sub, and enjoy cycling through the wonderful pages of the most important thing you will read all year.


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post May 3 2012, 06:40 PM
Yay, it's here~! Lookin' great so far, guys!


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post May 3 2012, 06:46 PM
QUOTE (Shmeckie @ May 3 2012, 05:26 PM) *
They are the same color.

That was my point.


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post May 3 2012, 09:36 PM
FUCK YEAH IT'S FINALLY HERE! Everything's lookin' great, Shmeckie, though I do have a few nitpicks. Maybe it's just me, but some of the dialogue seems a tad bit awkward:

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Look, Burt, they've got two fighters tailing me! I guess they find me to be the bigger threat, eh?


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Heh, oh yeah? We'll see who's the bigger threat!


I sort of expected Jacques to be more condescending and say something like, "Look, Burt, they've got two fighters tailing me. I guess they know who the real threat is." And then Burt would have a good-natured comeback like, "Don't flatter yourself. These West Bravo idiots wouldn't know a real threat from their own mother, [insert lighthearted insult here]!"or something to that effect.

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You should know to watch out for the red clouds! They're solid cloud, after all!


Again, it seems to me it'd flow better if he'd said, "You avoid the solid red clouds, remember?"

But other than that, yeah, next Friday can't come fast enough!

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post May 3 2012, 09:56 PM
QUOTE (Protto @ May 4 2012, 01:36 AM) *
I sort of expected Jacques to be more condescending and say something like, "Look, Burt, they've got two fighters tailing me. I guess they know who the real threat is." And then Burt would have a good-natured comeback like, "Don't flatter yourself. These West Bravo idiots wouldn't know a real threat from their own mother, [insert lighthearted insult here]!"or something to that effect.


Well, that first line is what he said, just worded differently, and Burt's not antagonistic enough to have a comeback like that. He's the "nice guy" to contrast against Jacques' "dick amongst the protagonists" aspect. Notice the worst thing he says to the West Bravo pilots is "how long've you guys been flyin'?!" Jacques is the one who would call someone an idiot. Burt's not the kind of guy to deliver much of a comeback.

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Again, it seems to me it'd flow better if he'd said, "You avoid the solid red clouds, remember?"


Solid Cloud is an actual term. The various colored clouds all have names, generally [one word adjective] Cloud. Solid Cloud, Rising Cloud, Sludge Cloud, and various other crazy colored clouds you'll all see in the future!

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On it.

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post May 4 2012, 07:39 AM
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post May 4 2012, 11:50 AM
Hey, I actually get to follow a webcomic now. I am happy.

If there were one criticism I would give it, I would say the red cloud scene should have been more "show, don't tell". I knew what the red clouds were without Burt's comment, but the comment did clarify that it was specifically red clouds that were solid, so I can't complain about it much.


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post May 6 2012, 09:24 AM
Fun adventure for all ages (So far).

What? Webcomics sometimes become a train no one can stop and then, ya know.

In any case, good luck!


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post May 6 2012, 04:08 PM
I'm sticking to the principle that, content-wise, the comic will never go beyond what I saw in cartoons as a kid in the 90's.


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post May 6 2012, 05:32 PM
Damn, I was counting on some Burt X Jacques action.


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