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post Sep 3 2010, 01:22 PM
Guess what happens when you look under romance in the Nightmare on Elm Street section of FF.net? Yeah, this shit just got real.

I think you guys know the drill by now.


Title- Trapped
Fandom- Nightmare on Elm Street
Pairing- Freddy/Garrett (OMC)
Rating- R or M
Summary- What happens when eighteen year old Garrett is forced to be with Freddy Krueger? A Nightmare on Elm St, story.
Warnings- Angst, BDSM, D/s, HJ, Language, M/M, N/C, Oral, Slash

I can tell this will be... fun.

Chapter 1

Before we even start, let's get one thing straight. Just because a dude pedophile molests a little boy, doesn't make them gay. In fact, pedos are usually male, and usually molest boys. And in all the movies, not once did Freddy ever try to do anything other than kill the guys.
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I didn't know what was happening until it was all too late.

Much like me when I read this...

"Come here Garrett. You're mine now." A deep raspy voice growled into Garrett Finnegan's ear.

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Garrett let out a shocked gasp as he shot up from his bed, only to find himself tied down, and drenched in his own sweat. "Wh-what is this? Nice prank bro, come back and untie me, you have officially scared me okay?"

Nope, this is for your own good. When you can stop wanking in your sleep I'll untie you.

The cruel voice from before laughed, "This isn't your brothers doing. It is mine, my dear Garrett.

...His brother ties him up? That's really messed up.

I have finally got you and I am not planning on letting you go so easily."

Garrett jumped in surprise as he felt four sharp objects, a lot like knifes, slowly trace up his thigh. Another hand followed up on the other leg, teasing the fine brown hairs of the 18 year olds legs. A satisfied chuckle escaped the evil man's mouth as his fingers touched a half-hard organ between the boy's legs.

The safe word is shed! The safe word is shed!

"No no don't touch me there! Stop! Do not fucking touch me there you pervert!

The first time I read this I read:" Don't not fucking touch me there..."

Rape! Rape!" The black haired, 6'2, pale boy screamed as he thrashed all the more. At least he did until a sharp pain shot through his leg, "Ahh!" He cried out as he tried to move his body from the pain.

"You are mine, you hear! You will belong to Freddy Kruger forever!" said voice yelled.

Why is this even happening?

Garrett whimpered as he turned his face away, not wanting to believe this was real. His face was jerked back to where it was a moment before. "Look at me! Look at who your new boyfriend is." Freddy laughed as his hand flexed over the black-haired boy's hardening erection. "Well, I can tell you are not appalled by me. Good, because we are gonna get to the good stuff right now."

This has now become painful to read. And why is Freddy talking like that?

Freddy let out a loud cackling laugh, chilling Garrett to the bone. Kruger quickly leaned down and let his tongue slide over the boy's cock, making the teen gasp.

Shed! Shed! Shed!

The tongue moved faster and faster, and then out of nowhere the tongue grew longer and surrounded the whole shaft, pulsing over the erection. Garrett cried out, his toes curling as he approached an orgasm he didn't want fulfilled because of this serial killer.

SHED!

"I-I...ahh! Please, no. Stop, uhn, can't hold it." Garrett choked out. When he did, Freddy removed his tongue, but licked his finger on his right hand, then pushed into the boy's virgin hole, easing it in carefully, then thrust roughly, hitting the teen's prostate dead on,

How is he doing that if Garrett is lying on his back...?

while he did that, he enveloped his mouth over the boy's cock, ready to catch all the sweet cum. The boy let out a scream worthy to 50 killing screams,

Lolwut?

as he came so hard he passed out during his release.

Freddy looked at the teen and let a small smile appear on his face, "Garrett, I wasn't always mean and cruel."

WTF? Yes he was! He fucking killed the class pet when he was a kid, he enjoyed pain when he was a teen, and he killed and molested kids when he was an adult! I hate it when authors are all "Oh no, Freddy has a soft side! He's just misunderstood!" Fuck you.

He sighed as he got up and covered the shivering teen.

With gasoline, then set him on fire.

As he was walking away he let out a frustrated growl, Fuck! I am already going soft and I just got the kid.

Um... for everyone's sake I'm hoping he means soft like he's being nice and not soft as in... yeah.


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post Sep 3 2010, 01:26 PM
Is this burnt Freddy or alive Freddy?


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post Sep 3 2010, 01:30 PM
I'm assuming that its burnt Freddy. It makes it so much worse.


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post Sep 3 2010, 02:22 PM
AHHHHHHHHH!


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Whereas THIS lazy sack of crap here makes me sick to my stomach.

Cal, God damn it. We were all supposed to dress up for this. It doesn't look like you even touched that nice suit I sewed for you, let alone swapped your eyes with those billiard balls and make them alternate rapidly.

This insubordination is putting me in a foul mood. It's bad enough I just had to take Falcor out behind the woodshed and blow his brains out after he caught the rabies."


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post Sep 3 2010, 02:36 PM
QUOTE (Ash @ Sep 3 2010, 03:30 PM)
I'm assuming that its burnt Freddy. It makes it so much worse.
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Either way, it's terrible.


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post Sep 3 2010, 05:52 PM
The hell? I haven't even seen nightmare on elm street (i know what it's about though) and I know how fucked up this is. Wait, does this thing have another chapter? because i think i would lose any respect I ever had for freddy if i had to read about Freddy seducing an 18 year old.
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post Sep 3 2010, 06:43 PM
What the hell did I just read


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post Sep 3 2010, 06:44 PM
Rule 34 strikes again!


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post Sep 3 2010, 07:42 PM
Why yes, Sniper-Queen! It DOES have another chapter!

Chapter 2

Thankfully, also the last chapter.
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After a few weeks of Freddy coming in and out of Garrett's room. Sometimes bringing food, other times just going to talk, yes, talk.

At least make it pre-rape pillow talk. Please.

It took a while but eventually Garret gave up on trying to leave, he had a feeling he wasn't in the original plane of existence anymore, anyways.

How is he stuck in the dream world anyway? Is he in a coma?

Finally a month of Garrett's captivity, Freddy came in and unlocked the chains tying him to the bed. "Come on, we're going out to eat." He gave a small smile that Garrett almost didn't see.

Its a trap!

"Uh...what? Eat? We're going out to eat...For real?" Garrett didn't know if he should trust the man that has kept him captive for so long.

Yeah just totally forget about that part where he RAPED YOU.

"What about clothes for me?"

What about leaving?

A look of surprise crossed over Freddy's face,

But it faded quickly. "You'll fucking walk around nude, bitch. Don't question me again."


"Oh yeah. Um, just a minute." And with a snap of his fingers a pair of tight light blue jeans, and a light grey 'Krueger rocks'. Which made Garrett chuckle a little, but he hid it with a cough. But Freddy knew better.

Uncle Freddy always knows better.

"Would you like a shower first?"

"Oh, yes please." Finnegan smiled brightly at the request. He was lead to a large bathroom with an almost transparent tile floor, and shower/jacuzzi set. "This is amazing, thanks for letting me get a shower."

Freddy's just gonna rape you in the shower.

Freddy nodded a little, "I'm...'...'...about making you stay in the bed." He rolled his eyes because he couldn't say 'sorry' to the young man he was starting to fall in love with.

NO! NO NO! SHEDSHEDSHED!

"I won't ever do that to you again, I promise."

"I believe you. And...I forgive you too." Garrett smiled shyly as he turned on the water, and let the water get warm before stepping in. "Do you want to come in here and take a shower too?"

SHED!

Temptation was on high, but Krueger held himself together and shook his head, "No, I am alright. You go ahead." He turned around and left the room, leaving Garrett to mull about his thoughts about Freddy, and how he was treating him now.

And how he will most likely rape you in the future.

"Technically he was never bad to begin with. I just never understood his intentions to me.

...He's not evil, he's just misunderstood.

Life sucked back home anyways, so life here...really is better.

I just love being tied down, raped, and held captive for weeks on end!

I bet my so called 'parents' don't even realize I am gone. My brothers are probably glad, and having parties."

He scrubbed himself good, and even in the crevices that might get licked, since he knew Freddy well enough. Garrett also cleaned his balls and cock, and he controlled himself, not letting it get hard, or react to his cleaning.

That was an important plot point. At this point, I also feel that I should mention that the writer is a chick.

Twenty minutes later he walked out of the bathroom with a towel around his waist and a smile on his face. "Thank you, I feel a lot better after that shower. Where are we going to eat?" Finnegan asked as he put on his clothes.

Freddy was sitting in a chair and had on a clean dark green silk shirt, and a deep red leather coat over it.

Why do people think that red and green are the only colors he wears?

He refused to wear any other color for shirts, red and green was his trademark, and his dress pants were black. "We are going to a Italian restaurant, a favorite of mine. And might I say, you look ravishing." He murmured, his husky voice making Garrett tingle inside.

And making me projectile vomit.

"Thank you. You look very nice too." He blushed as he fiddled with his clothes. "I love Italian. I'm ready if you are."

Fred nodded and put a hand on the young man's back, leading him out of the room slowly, as to not put too much pressure on him, since he hadn't been out of the room/bed for a month. "You doing okay?"

JIOEHFIOHFIODSHGIOOJ! Where is this coming from?!

"Yes, yes. I'm fine. But I really want to go and eat now." Garrett gave Freddy his cute 'Feed me Seymour' look.

Oh by all means, ruin everything.

"Haha! Very nice look." Krueger laughed as he and Garrett walked out of the mansion and toward a restaurant that was only a block or two away.

I... am finding it very, very hard to imagine this is actually Freddy. I think that's a good thing. Well, for me anyway.

When they got into the building, it was an amazing piece of work. Their were chandeliers hanging from the ceiling. There were real china on the tables, fine wines being sold, and everyone was dressed like it was a proper attire only, place. Garrett looked down at his clothes worriedly, "I'm not dressed right!" He whispered into Freddy's ear.

Dude, that is the least of your worries.

"Nonsense. They won't even notice that you aren't dressed like them. It will be alright. I just want you comfortable."

WHY IS THIS HAPPENING?!

"Oh...well thank you."

During the two hours of in the restaurant, they laughed, drank fine wine, ate exquisite foods, and shared stories with eachother.

Freddy: ...and she just kept screamin'! Who knew a five-year-old could make so much noise?

As they were walking back to the mansion Freddy grinned, "That was a lot of fun."

But not as much fun as the rape.

"Yeah it was. We should do it all the time."

That made Krueger stop, "Would you really be willing to live with me...and do this all the time?"

If only Nancy could see him now.

Garrett Finnegan was never more sure of anything in his whole life. "I'm very willing to live with you." A smirk came to his face, "As long as you promise to do that tongue thing again."

This hurts me to read.

A loud laugh echoed around them as Freddy let it out.

Garrett cried as his cock was surrounded by Freddy's very hot tongue. The tip teased the slit, coaxing more salty fluid out. "Oh yes yes!" He gripped the sheets under him and arched upwards, "Please take me in your mouth." He pleaded.

...Are my eyes bleeding? Cuz it feels like my eyes are bleeding. Wait, are they doing this IN THE RESTAURANT?!

It didn't take long, cause Fred would have done anything for the young man. "Cum as much as you want." He said as he swallowed the shaft down, and groaned, making his throat vibrate around the sensitive head.

...This is seriously starting to make me a homophobe.

A cry escaped Finnegan as his body tightened up, his balls swelling, and his cock throbbing hard for a few seconds before he let loose. The fluid slide down Krueger's throat, and he swallowed it heartily. "Mmm, you taste amazing."

No. Just... no.

A soft laugh, "I bet you taste amazing too." And Garrett proceeded to find out if Freddy Krueger really did taste that good, and Freddy did.

THAT IS MORE THAN I NEEDED TO KNOW ABOUT FREDDY EVER

THE END

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post Sep 3 2010, 08:01 PM
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...This is seriously starting to make me a homophobe.

Reading this chapter almost made me want to change my avatar. almost

But oh my god, I was literally making gagging faces at my computer while I read this.
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post Sep 3 2010, 08:32 PM
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And Garrett proceeded to find out if Freddy Krueger really did taste that good, and Freddy did.


And lo, didst God proclaim that Freddy Krueger's undead semen did taste like cinnamon buns. And it was good.

*gags*

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post Sep 3 2010, 09:06 PM
QUOTE (Mysty @ Sep 3 2010, 09:32 PM)
And lo, didst God proclaim that Freddy Krueger's undead semen did taste like cinnamon buns.  And it was good.

*gags*
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I'm just gonna be glad that I don't like cinnamon buns.


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post Sep 3 2010, 09:22 PM
This is an abomination to ANoES. I loved that movie. I will never see it the same way ever again, thanks to this story.


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post Sep 4 2010, 07:53 AM
If he's been tied to the bed for a full month, wouldn't he be very, very weak by now?

To quote an article I found: "Muscle wasting has been the astronaut's bane since the dawn of space flight. Without exercise, astronauts can lose 25 to 40 percent of the muscle mass in their legs in three weeks, Stodieck said".

http://m.rockymountainnews.com/news/2005/M...in-the-name-of/

Not to mention the circulation would be cut off from the ropes/chains, what ever the hell Freddy used.

"Life sucked back home anyways, so life here...really is better. "

His parents took away his ipod, didn't they?

"Freddy was sitting in a chair and had on a clean dark green silk shirt, and a deep red leather coat over it. "

That sounds ugly as fuck. Then again, it's Freddy. Nothing's going to look flattering with a mug like this:



"..Are my eyes bleeding? Cuz it feels like my eyes are bleeding. Wait, are they doing this IN THE RESTAURANT?!"

I think the story actually said that they were walking home...but I guess that means they were doing that outside.

That's...that's not much better. sick.gif

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post Sep 4 2010, 07:02 PM
QUOTE (Things @ Sep 4 2010, 08:53 AM)
"..Are my eyes bleeding? Cuz it feels like my eyes are bleeding. Wait, are they doing this IN THE RESTAURANT?!"

I think the story actually said that they were walking home...but I guess that means they were doing that outside.
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You were right, I totally missed that lol. Show's how much I was paying attention.


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post Sep 4 2010, 07:05 PM
I think TECHNICALLY they were supposed to have gotten back to the bedroom by then and it was just really, really, REALLY horribly transitioned.


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