Outline · Standard · [ Linear+ ] Growing up, another Repo! fic, this is almost beyond bad.

[Kuramastrassx3]

Alright, this is the Repo! fic I was talking about that had me in tears. I decided I may as well start it and get it over with.

The author of these is Tesareswrist. Yes, this is the same girl who brought us For Now, Continued Discretion, Two Ascots and a Dress, We Have Both Been Kept in Bondage, and He Needs Me. Someone else is welcome to take a crack at some of her other ones (there’s a M-rated WIGGLES fic on her list there, for cryin’ out loud) if they want. If not, I’ll come back… eventually.

This’ll be the last Repo! fic I do for a while, probably.

Title: Pains of Growing up

Pairing(s)/Character(s): Luigi/Shilo

Rating: M/R/NC-17

Word Count: 1782

Summary:Shilo decides it would be a great idea to have sex with Luigi. Which means that Shilo is apparently retarded. Post Repo! (Yeah, no shit.)

Warnings/ Kinks: Sex, language, BDSM, het

Shilo wasn't sure what she would do with herself after her father died. She tried staying with Graverobber for a while, but he got bored of her and disappeared.

That makes me . I’m a huge supporter of Graverobber-Shilo.

So she went to the Largos. Amber saw this as a great opportunity to show off how much Geneco had changed and that the Largos were a sweet and generous family. She was given a room in their home that hadn't been used in many years. On her second night there...

The floor caved in and she fell to her death. Amber forgot that was the reason that room hadn’t been used in a while.

"Shi" Luigi said smiling creepily. "What the fuck are you doing up this fucking late honey?"

No no, this is all wrong. Luigi would stab her first, then ask her what she’s doing.

Shilo jumped out of her skin. "Oh dear. I thought you were Pavi" she said.

"So am I a fucking disapointment or are you fucking happy to see me?"

"Happy... Pavi... he he scares me"

Luigi nodded. He was getting rather good at this pretense thing. (I guess you can call it that, seeing as how he hasn’t stabbed her yet.) "Want me to fucking walk you back to your fucking room?" he asked.

She nodded, but when they got there, she grabbed onto his arm. "Please don't leave me here" she choked out "I don't want to be alone. Last night- Pavi-" she cut herself off.

As much as Pavi may scare her, I really doubt she’d be holding onto the man who was so excited at the thought of her killing her father.

Remember? Luigi jumped up in his seat and was all, “KEEL HIM!”

"Did he fuckin’ rape you?" Luigi asked "Ill fuckin kill him! Motherfucker!" he gasped, starting to turn toward Pavi's room.

Shilo grabbed his shirt "No, no he didnt. He got distracted...

Shilo, using her quick thinking skills, grabbed a hand mirror and held it in front of his face.

I just wont want it to be that way, not with him. He's scary. Please, please let me stay with you"

Luigi wasn't used to this. Shilo had seen the Largos on TV, but never read the gossip magazines and clearly didn't know about Luigi's temper.

…

I really doubt she’d be holding onto the man who was so excited at the thought of her killing her father.
Remember? Luigi jumped up in his seat and was all, “KEEL HIM!”

"Why don't you stay with Amber, she has her own fuckin’ personal bodygaurds, no one could fuckin’ get to you there"

"She doesn't like me very much, we had a thing..." Luigi sighed. "I guess you can stay in my room. As long as you don't fuckin' snore"

Dammit, he discovered her secret! She’s really a Snorlax.

She giggled even though he didn't intend to be funny. "Thank you." They walked to Luigi's room. He quickly slammed shut a large cedar chest before she could see it's contents. His room was fairly simple compared to his siblings-a few pieces of rich, dark furniture, forest green walls with creme trim and a large, four post bed. He rifled through his closet to find an extra blanket, which he tossed to Shilo.

"I don't share very well" he explained. "Good night. I'm going to read a bit before I sleep" he turned out the lights and picked up a small device about the size of a book but thinner and turend on the screen. He saw Shilo snuggled under her blanket facing away from him so he put his glasses on and settled into reading about the betrayal of Julius Ceasar.

Has the author WATCHED Repo!? Does she honestly think people in this world READ anything but tabloids?

After act 2, he felt a hand at his arm. "Yes?" he peered down at her from his sitting position. Shilo popped up onto her knees and started kissing Luigi. "Woah what the motherfucking hell!" she sprung up, ripping his glasses off.

*fingers crossed* Stab her, stab her, stab her…

Shilo looked hurt. "I just wanted to thank you" she sprawled back out on the bed. "Like, in a way you'd enjoy. Pavi may scare me but you dont"

"You clearly dont know Luigi Fuckin Largo then." he grumped and sat back down, ignoring Shilo's pawing at him with big sad eyes.

Goddammit…

"Listen, just go to sleep. I'm not at all interested in you okay?"

"Why not?" she asked.

Luigi: Because you’re fuckin’ bald. Also because you almost fuckin’ inherited my father’s company. And let’s not forget that you’re fuckin’ jailbait, and Luigi Largo ain’t no pedo. Now shut up before I decide to stab you and hide your body in Amber’s closet.

Luigi sighed. "I'm not into the same things most people are. I like to beat and slice girls up while I fuck them, so shut up and go to sleep." He resumed his book, brooding that he had to reject sex because of his company image.

Shilo lay back down, shocked. He seemed like such a nice guy-aside from stabbing her father- she could hardly imagine him bringing a knife down on her, threatening at her throat, slicing at her breast... come to think about it, she could imagine it. She rolled over, looking at his dark eyes, tucked under the covers, her hand wandered down to her panties and she felt around a little bit. Luigi's nose twiched.

Luigi can smell girls masturbating or something, I guess.

"Are you-?" he asked. "Did that fuckin turn you on?"

No, her vagina just itched.

"I guess" she said. Did it? What was up with that?

"Have you been cut for sex before?" he asked. There was a glimmer of hope in his voice. Maybe he would get laid tonight after all.

"I've never had sex before"

I find that hard to believe, considering she’d supposedly been hanging out with Graverobber for a while…

"Oh" he said, disappointed.

"But there has to be a first time for everything, right?" she was starting to wonder where this all was coming from, why she suddenly wanted to have sex so badly.

I’m gonna take a stab at it and guess it’s because she’s a teenager and she’s been locked in her house her whole life. Dammit, does that mean the author actually knows something about characterization? Fuck…

Yesterday Pavi promised her the time of her life, why would she go for the man that wanted to beat her?

Well, Pavi’s flamingly gay, so…

He looked at her. "I told you I can't have sex with you, it would be too much for you, especially on your first time out."

"I'm tough"

In one sharp motion he was on top of her, holding the knife from his bedside table against her throat. "You like this? Huh? Is this how you want your fucking cherry popped, scared and" he pressed the blade in gently "in pain?"

"Yes" she whispered, unsure of why.

He pulled away from her. "I'm not going to have mercy on you." he lied. This was her first time, of course he wasn't going to pull out the big guns. "Strip or leave" he turned to the cedar chest and selected a black and green leather flogger, medium weight, more thuddy than a crop or whip and less stingy.

You know, it just sunk in for me that this person seems to know quite a bit about this stuff. Either they really know what they’re talking about or they’re a really good bullshitter.

Shilo was naked and had her knees puller to her chest on the bed when he turned back around. "Lay on the bed, facedown" Pleased that she had stayed, he looked at her perfect form, and ran the tails of the flogger up and down her back a few times. Might as well get this initial one over with. He brought it down on her with about half his strength on her ass.

"Ow!" Shilo cried out. "That hurt"

"That's the fucking point, princess. Don't you look up at me you worthless peasant" he snapped. He brought it down three more times, on her shoulders, her lower back and again on her hot little ass. He picked his gloves up off his bureau and put the left one on. He smacked her butt, then put his right hand under her hips to guide them up and hold it there, giving him easier access to his target. He spanked her as one does to a child,

……………………………………………………………this person is incredibly disturbed. And not like the band.

and she stayed still, moaning only slightly. After about 15 hits, he backed up and started using the flogger like a windmill, hitting her back and going full circle to hit the same spot again and again. He sat next to her,

While still hitting her? O_o When did Luigi become Mrs. Incredible?

and pulled her face out of the mattress it was buried in to check her face. It had tears, but she looked brave as she peered into his eyes. "What did I say about looking me in the face, huh, princess?" Being denied the pleasure of looking at him was infuriating, and for some reason she loved it. She could feel her back and rear getting very warm, and even though this hurt, she wanted more, and didn't want to make him angry so he would stop.

She averted her eyes and was rewarded with "Good girl" and a pat to the head.

Shilo: Woof?

Luigi smacked her ass a few more times, till it turned a pleasing shade of pink. Then he told her to stay still while he took his clothes off, balled them up and threw them in the hamper. He went through the chest again, extracting a riding crop, a scalpel-like knife and leather cuffs for her wrists.

"We're going to play a little game. Number these, one through three. Don't talk"

She pointed to the scalpel, crop and cuffs.

"You just picked before, during, and after"he grinned at her, the lust for blood coming into his eyes. "On your back, and don't look at me till I tell you to"

Shilo closed her eyes to avoid accidents. She felt fingers around her pussy. She was visually unaware and totally defenseless when the the blade nipped into the mound of pubic hair, seeming to draw little pictures in the flesh there.

…

She could feel warm blood coming up even though the cuts were shallow and didn't hurt much more than a shot. It felt almost comforting when his mouth descended on it to suck the blood up, and then left bloodstained kisses all across her chest and belly. Her breath was shallow and slow. The knife clattered to the floor.

Then he stabbed her with a hidden knife and she died. The end.

"You can have the privilege of looking at me now, Princess." Luigi growled in a low voice. Here eyes fluttered open. He was face to face with her, staring her straight in the eye. His cock was ready, pressing at her entrance. This scared her more than any whip ever could.

I bet Luigi’s heavily compensating for something, which is why he’s so angry all the time.

"Will it hurt?" she whispered.

"Not as much" he told her. He went in slowly, pushing a little at a time until he was in her entirely. She grabbed his arms and dug her nails in, getting torn asunder for the first time was agonizing, even though she was well lubed and blood was dripping into her warm pussy. She cried out slightly, Luigi put a hand over her mouth and raised the crop, whipping it onto her thigh. She screamed and he began pumping into her, cropping her for good measure every 5 thrusts or so. All at once, he dropped the crop and let go of her mouth.

"Harder, please, fuck me harder please" she shouted. He pounded hard into her and she came harder than he imagined a virgin could. She was so far into her own heaven that she didn't so much notice the warm liquid filling her vagina.

He rolled off of her, and shoved her balled up panties in her crotch to keep sperm from spilling on his bed.

But he didn’t care about the blood?

He cleaned himself up and returned to the happy girl.

"Satisfied?" he asked, clipping the handcuffs on her.

She nodded. "It was not what I expected. Better I think"

He put a rope around the middle off the cuffs and tied it to the bedpost. "Go to sleep, Princess" he told her, flicked the light back off and went to sleep.

Excuse me while I go look for something sharp to rip my eyes out with.

Seven more chapters of this shit to go.

This post has been edited by Kuramastrassx3: Jul 22 2010, 02:09 PM

[Protto]

Wait until later today (probably) when I do the next chapter.

It's by far the worst IMHO.

Not that! Anything but that Master!

[Kuramastrassx3]

Well too bad, you get to read it anyway.

I decided, out of the goodness of my heart, to get this atrocity over with. So you’re getting two for the price of one!

You’re welcome.

Title: Pt. 7 The Horrors of Growing Up

Pairing(s)/Character(s): Grilo *shudder*

Rating: M (Mature)

Word Count: 1150

Summary: "Growing Up" in which Graves gets fed up with being kept like this.

And that really has nothing to do with growing up, but hey, whatever floats your boat, I guess.

Warnings/ Kinks: rape. Death. Language.

The death of all that is good and holy, she means, and definitely not Graverobber.

Graverobber was fed up, near desperation. He had been there for six months, dealing with Luigi's rage, Pavi's creepiness, Amber's angry pregnancy hormones and Shilo's sobbing if you looked at her funny. He wasn't able to work, so he couldn't make any money and worse he could not get laid.

Hey. Those GENterns aren’t there just to look pretty, you know…

He tried once with Amber, but she slapped him and then started bawling. He paced around his room. He flopped down on his bed. He sighed and watched the shadows on his ceiling move.

Graverobber: ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL DAY, STARING AT THE CEILING

MAKING

FRIENDS WITH SHADOWS ON MY WALL

Slowly.

"You should take Robert with you." Shilo suggested to her master.

WTF? Random scene change!

"Why?" Luigi let Shilo tie his ascot as he buttoned up his shirt.

"He is lonely and stressed out too. Amber got him that GPS so you can take him out and not lose him."

GPS? Don’t you mean something more like a tracking chip or something?

Shilo tightened the ascot carefully around his neck and did the top few buttons for him. "You look good." she smiled.

Luigi checked his hair in the mirror and twisted his face up. "I'm going gray."

"You are not." Shilo sighed.

"Go ask the Graverobber if he wants to go with me and Pavi." he said, going to his closet to find pants. Shilo sauntered down the hall to Graverobber.

“Sauntered”? That sounds like it would be hard while pregnant…

"Hey Graves." she said, unlocking his door.

"What?" he snarled at her.

"Do you want to go out for drinks with Pavi and Luigi?" she asked.

"I guess." he shrugged. "I'll be down in a few minutes."

So the guys went out, got smashed and stumbled home, Pavi with a slut on each arm, and Robert Z. Graves

-cries tears of blood-

still angry- Luigi had decided it was time to go right as Graves found a girl to go down on him.

Wow, Luigi’s kind of an asshole, no?

Well, at least it wasn’t Pavi this time. You know, like, from this other fic she wrote…

Luigi came home and mounted his

horse.

Luigi: Look at my horse, my horse is amazing! Give it a lick!

Shilo: Mmm! It tastes just like raisins!

fiancée, driving the headboard into the wall, causing Robert to pull his pillow over his head and mutter curses every time Shilo screamed or moaned. Why, oh why did he have the room right next to them?

The next day Graves realized the door to his room had been left unlocked.

Wow, GENECo. security sucks ass then, I guess.

And it was a weekday. Luigi had left him alone with Shilo... since the pool incident, Luigi had made sure Graves was locked up whenever Shilo was home alone.

If you wanna be technical, if Graverobber’s around she isn’t home alone.

Graves smirked.

He didn't say anything, he didn't need to. This was primal, animal lust from an animal that had been caged up for far too long. He hunted Shilo through the halls, found her curled up on the chair in the library, reading "What To Expect When You're Expecting" and rubbing her belly. The image of fertility. Graverobber growled and pounced on her.

Then he ate her. Because apparently Graverobber is a lion now.

He shoved her to the floor and pinned her hands down, kneeling over her hips. He moved them so he held both her tiny wrists in one hand as he ripped her dress off with his free hand.

"Rob- the fuck?" Shilo cried out.

He hardly heard her, focused on ripping her panties and freeing himself from his pants.

Shilo might not have the best street smarts but she knew she could not fight this man off, and she could tell from the look in his eyes that he would have no reservations about hurting her. She fumbled with her watch and hoped she hit the right buttons to redial the last number

I wanna know how she did that when he’s got her wrists pinned.

as Graverobber got his pants down just far enough and he dropped back down, supporting himself on his free hand and thrust into her without warning. He groaned and grunted.

"Stop, Rob, get off of me!" Shilo screamed. He slapped her across the face, and she just started sobbing. If she didn't struggle, maybe he would not hurt her and she did not want the baby to get hurt so he lied there, sobbing and screaming while he fucked her.

Luigi was interview a few of the applicants for the latest job openings at GeneCo. The GeneCo interview process was fun, first you go to talk to Amber.

And if you managed to not get addicted to Zydrate or get an STD, you got to move onto the next round!

If you made it passed (AN: It’s PAST, you idiot) her, you got interviewed by Pavi. Lastly, if you had not been raped or had your face repo'ed and you came back for your third interview, you would have to talk to Luigi. And, after all that, you were still alive, you generally got hired.

'Idiot fuckups, every last one of them' he thought to himself. His watch beeped. Oh thank god. "I have a call from my girl. I'll be right back." he absented him from him self, glaring into the room. He let the call come through. "Stop, Rob get off of me!" his future wife's voice screamed. Luigi's blood ran cold as he heard the slap. Luigi bolted to the stairs. The elevator would take to long. He lept up the stairs five or six at a time, his phone still screaming at him and sobbing.

I didn’t know Luigi’s phone was being raped…

He arrived in their home and could hear her screaming in real life. He pulled out his knife and ran into the library, the Graverobber didn't even see it coming, he was so engrossed in trying to get off before Shilo could get away, that he only saw the ceiling for a brief second as Luigi pulled the man back by his hair and sliced deep into his throat. He shoved the man backwards off of Shilo and left him to die.

I… what?

-cries- My poor, sexy sexy Graverobber…

"Shilo, Shilo are you okay?" he asked. When she saw her master had come for her she grabbed his shirt and pulled him toward her, sobbing into his chest. Luigi wrapped his arms around her and squeezed until Graves stopped making that gargling noise and Shilo stopped sobbing. "I am so, so sorry." Luigi muttered into her black hair.

Luigi’s totally OOC here. He should be stabbing things. Like Graverobber. He should have pulled him off Shilo, thrown him to the floor, and stabbed him a whole lot.

Amber came home for lunch to find this scene. She fell sobbing at Graverobber's side, touching his hair and face and sobbing. She should have known that she could not keep him here forever, but had thought...she didn't even know what to think when Luigi explained why Robert was dead.

Shilo's sobbing quieted and she rubbed her belly. "She's still kicking." she smiled weakly.

…drat.

"I got to go get this body cleaned up." Luigi said, stalking away for the moment.

Pavi saw Amber was upset as he too came home and tried to intercept her to comfort her. "Leave me alone, Paviche!" Amber screeched as she shoved passed him into her room.

Pavi looked hurt. "She really doesn't love me, does she?" he asked no one in particular.

Shilo: Nah, Amber hates everyone. Except herself. So don’t feel too bad.

Shilo looked at him honestly. "I don't think she does." and she gave Pavi a hug, holding him for several minutes before he absented himself to the library to look at the body.

This is the second time – ABSENTED IS NOT A REAL WORD

Well apparently Microsoft Word thinks it is BUT YOU KNOW WHAT, FUCK YOU AND YOUR SPELLCHECK

He carefully took out a sharp pocket knife and cut away at the face. Maybe Amber would love him more if he looked like the man she had loved.

Yeah mayb – No, it doesn’t work like that.

Last chapter! Are you ready? Because I’m sure as hell not!

Someone hold me.

Title: The Happiness of Growing Up

Is that this story finally ends.

Pairing(s)/Character(s): A bit of Pavi/Amber

Rating: M (Mature)

Word Count:

Summary: "Growing Up" in which the babies are born. And Pavi is weird.

And the author needs help.

Warnings/ Kinks: rape, childbirth

Not together, I hope. Because OH GOD THE IMAGES

Note: Some fucking bastard stole my name for Shi's kid. So I had to think of a new one, and it's crap. Well, actually it's a very nice name but not what I would have picked. And for those of you that know me personally- STFU!

Author: I mean, I really wanted to name her Renesmee, but it was already taken! Sadface. It’s not like more than one character in the world can share the same name, you know. Gosh knows there’s only been one character named Harry ever in the history of literature.

Amber had a little boy in February. He was premature and tiny, and had a lot of health problems that were the result of a combination of factors- Amber's Zydrate use and surgeries, the child's incestuous linage and the prematurity. He spent two months in the NICU, but he eventually came home. Marc Anthony Largo. They were told he would not live to see five years old. Amber disappeared for a week after that, leaving Pavi to take care of his son. He didn't mind so much, he was a better parent then Amber anyway.



Shilo loved having the baby around, she could get in a few months of practice before her own kid was born.

Amber was returned to the Largo house at the end of her week's 'vacation' by the cops, and she was so high she fell asleep the minute she hit her bed, not even bothering to even ask how Anthony was.

Pavi had finished feeding Anthony to bed and put him to bed, kissing the boy gently. He asked Shilo if she would keep an ear out for him, and she gave him a thumbs up, all she could do while she was blowing her fiance. Pavi was so jealous of them. They were in love. She would do anything for him and he took such good care of her.

…Need I bring up all the times he’s hit her and beat her and cut her and…

Pavi took the garment bag out of his closet and put it flat on his bed. He unzipped it and pulled out a small box, about the size of a shoebox and opened it. Inside the box was a pale white, chemically preserved face, one of the three he kept preserved, in addition to Mag's and Amber's.

I swear to God, if I ever catch Pavi wearing Mag’s face in a fanfic, even though that’s really in-character for Pavi, I will… I don’t know anymore.

Pavi sat in front of his vanity and unclipped his current face, looking at his scarred reflection for just a moment in something resembling disgust. He took the white face out of it's box and clipped it on slowly. Graverobber. Pavi changed his clothes into something more like what the Graverobber would have worn. He pulled Graverobber's jacket out of the garment bag and shrugged it on. Lastly, he put on the wig he had had made out of Graverobber's own hair.

Okay, now this is just over-the-top. Not even Pavi is this creepy.

Pavi looked at himself in the mirror. He looked disgusting and smelled worse, but this was what Amber would want. She would have to see how much he wanted her now.

Pavi walked to Amber's room. She was sleeping. He didn't say anything just went over and ripped her clothes off. Amber stirred. "Not now, Graves, I'm sleepin..." she trailed off and Pavi roughly positioned her. Amber woke up, realizing what she had said. With only a tiny bit of light coming in through her windows, she could see Graverobber's face glowing white, and the fuzz of his jacket. "Graves, you're dead."she reminded him, not resisting his advances as he unzipped his pants and spread her legs.

Amber: …well, whatever. Just hit me up with some Z later, then.

Amber was starting to get scared. "This isn't real. You're dead. I saw your body!" she cried out, she tried to move away but Pavi held her in place as he penetrated her.

"Shut up, Amber." he said, speaking rough and low.

She recognized the voice as one she had not heard in a long time, Pavi's non-accented voice. She felt his hands on her breasts and his cock penetrating her body, shoving in roughly, trying as hard as he could to be Graverobber for her. "No! No, I don't want this, Pavi!" she screamed.

Pavi was wounded that she had started fighting when she figured out who he was, but kept going. He had tried so hard, why wouldn't she love him?

Because it’s creepy and wrong?

All he wanted was once, one time he could feel like she loved him. He could feel his desire waning. He pulled out and climbed off of her. "Go back to sleep." he said without regaining his accent. "I'm not taking care of your son again tomorrow." he spat, leaving her room. Amber quickly fell back asleep, under the influence of the glow, and quickly forgot about the incident.

Pavi didn't.

Months, passed, getting into May now, and Shilo was late. Nine days, ten hours and thirty four minutes late. She was in the hospital, getting induced...which was a very ineffective process, get an IV of something and then wait. She'd been on the IV since the morning, and had gotten an epidural sometime in the afternoon as her contractions started to kill. Luigi had run home for food because it was late and he was hungry. Shilo was bored, just lying in a hospital bed all day does that to you.

So does reading bad fanfictions sometimes.

Then she felt something pop inside of her and felt a huge, warm gush coming out of her. She froze in terror, then her hand worked it's way over to the call button. An eternity later, a voice came over the speaker. "Yes?"

Shilo: …I think I wet myself.

"Um, hi... I think my water broke..." Shilo said, terrified.

"The nurse will be right down."

About four hundred years passed in Shilo's brain as she waited. They confirmed that her water broke and cleaned up the mess. She called Luigi. "Where are you?" she pleaded.

"I'm having dinner, then I'm going to be right back."

"Come back now." she begged.

"What's wrong?" he asked.

"My water broke." she whispered.

Luigi forgot about his dinner.

A man? Forget about dinner?

The next hour or so was a total blur. Luigi got back. Shilo found out she was ten centimeters dilated. She saw the top of the baby's head, all covered in gray and white goop.

I… somehow I just don’t think she’d be able to see that.

Also, I think she’d be in far too much pain to even care.

She watched Luigi's disgusted and intrigued face as she pushed the baby out, and it was held up for her to see. The moment she saw the baby she burst into a huge smile. "Beautiful!" she gasped out. The baby was weighed (7lbs 2oz)and measured,

And then the butcher sliced it up to be sold at $1.49 a pound.

then wrapped in a blanket and handed to it's mother. "She's so perfect." The room was cleaned up around Shilo and she handed the baby to Luigi, who held her as thought she might break.

He looked at his daughter. "I never knew I'd love her so much...

THAT’S SHILO AND NATHAN’S SONG YOU FUCKTARD

Julia. I want to call her Julia." he said, not knowing why he picked the name or why he felt so strongly about needing to name her, claim her as his smiled and nodded.

Julia and Shilo were discharged from the hospital after the standard two days, and Shilo was happy to be home.

…

At least it’s over now, I guess…

[Protto]

Well, congratulations. You ended it. With two chapters of that in one go. I hope you're happy. Because, if you're reading this, then it means I'm gone now. I've gone to a place where there is no pain and MoA's dream is reality. Thank you oh-so-very much.

[Kuramastrassx3]

T-T I'm sorry!

[TigerEyes]

Thank goodness it's over... Why do I have the feeling that Graverobber's rape scene was supposed to be sexy?

I did kind of laugh that Amber forgot her brother raped her the next day... Man, he is SO high on her list of priorities.

Also, the name of my music teacher in elementary school was "Mrs. Graves".

[shiroamasa]

This story was awful! I never want to read it again!