[ Outline ] · Standard · Linear+ Growing up, another Repo! fic, this is almost beyond bad.

[Kuramastrassx3]

Alright, this is the Repo! fic I was talking about that had me in tears. I decided I may as well start it and get it over with.

The author of these is Tesareswrist. Yes, this is the same girl who brought us For Now, Continued Discretion, Two Ascots and a Dress, We Have Both Been Kept in Bondage, and He Needs Me. Someone else is welcome to take a crack at some of her other ones (there’s a M-rated WIGGLES fic on her list there, for cryin’ out loud) if they want. If not, I’ll come back… eventually.

This’ll be the last Repo! fic I do for a while, probably.

Title: Pains of Growing up

Pairing(s)/Character(s): Luigi/Shilo

Rating: M/R/NC-17

Word Count: 1782

Summary:Shilo decides it would be a great idea to have sex with Luigi. Which means that Shilo is apparently retarded. Post Repo! (Yeah, no shit.)

Warnings/ Kinks: Sex, language, BDSM, het

Shilo wasn't sure what she would do with herself after her father died. She tried staying with Graverobber for a while, but he got bored of her and disappeared.

That makes me . I’m a huge supporter of Graverobber-Shilo.

So she went to the Largos. Amber saw this as a great opportunity to show off how much Geneco had changed and that the Largos were a sweet and generous family. She was given a room in their home that hadn't been used in many years. On her second night there...

The floor caved in and she fell to her death. Amber forgot that was the reason that room hadn’t been used in a while.

"Shi" Luigi said smiling creepily. "What the fuck are you doing up this fucking late honey?"

No no, this is all wrong. Luigi would stab her first, then ask her what she’s doing.

Shilo jumped out of her skin. "Oh dear. I thought you were Pavi" she said.

"So am I a fucking disapointment or are you fucking happy to see me?"

"Happy... Pavi... he he scares me"

Luigi nodded. He was getting rather good at this pretense thing. (I guess you can call it that, seeing as how he hasn’t stabbed her yet.) "Want me to fucking walk you back to your fucking room?" he asked.

She nodded, but when they got there, she grabbed onto his arm. "Please don't leave me here" she choked out "I don't want to be alone. Last night- Pavi-" she cut herself off.

As much as Pavi may scare her, I really doubt she’d be holding onto the man who was so excited at the thought of her killing her father.

Remember? Luigi jumped up in his seat and was all, “KEEL HIM!”

"Did he fuckin’ rape you?" Luigi asked "Ill fuckin kill him! Motherfucker!" he gasped, starting to turn toward Pavi's room.

Shilo grabbed his shirt "No, no he didnt. He got distracted...

Shilo, using her quick thinking skills, grabbed a hand mirror and held it in front of his face.

I just wont want it to be that way, not with him. He's scary. Please, please let me stay with you"

Luigi wasn't used to this. Shilo had seen the Largos on TV, but never read the gossip magazines and clearly didn't know about Luigi's temper.

…

I really doubt she’d be holding onto the man who was so excited at the thought of her killing her father.
Remember? Luigi jumped up in his seat and was all, “KEEL HIM!”

"Why don't you stay with Amber, she has her own fuckin’ personal bodygaurds, no one could fuckin’ get to you there"

"She doesn't like me very much, we had a thing..." Luigi sighed. "I guess you can stay in my room. As long as you don't fuckin' snore"

Dammit, he discovered her secret! She’s really a Snorlax.

She giggled even though he didn't intend to be funny. "Thank you." They walked to Luigi's room. He quickly slammed shut a large cedar chest before she could see it's contents. His room was fairly simple compared to his siblings-a few pieces of rich, dark furniture, forest green walls with creme trim and a large, four post bed. He rifled through his closet to find an extra blanket, which he tossed to Shilo.

"I don't share very well" he explained. "Good night. I'm going to read a bit before I sleep" he turned out the lights and picked up a small device about the size of a book but thinner and turend on the screen. He saw Shilo snuggled under her blanket facing away from him so he put his glasses on and settled into reading about the betrayal of Julius Ceasar.

Has the author WATCHED Repo!? Does she honestly think people in this world READ anything but tabloids?

After act 2, he felt a hand at his arm. "Yes?" he peered down at her from his sitting position. Shilo popped up onto her knees and started kissing Luigi. "Woah what the motherfucking hell!" she sprung up, ripping his glasses off.

*fingers crossed* Stab her, stab her, stab her…

Shilo looked hurt. "I just wanted to thank you" she sprawled back out on the bed. "Like, in a way you'd enjoy. Pavi may scare me but you dont"

"You clearly dont know Luigi Fuckin Largo then." he grumped and sat back down, ignoring Shilo's pawing at him with big sad eyes.

Goddammit…

"Listen, just go to sleep. I'm not at all interested in you okay?"

"Why not?" she asked.

Luigi: Because you’re fuckin’ bald. Also because you almost fuckin’ inherited my father’s company. And let’s not forget that you’re fuckin’ jailbait, and Luigi Largo ain’t no pedo. Now shut up before I decide to stab you and hide your body in Amber’s closet.

Luigi sighed. "I'm not into the same things most people are. I like to beat and slice girls up while I fuck them, so shut up and go to sleep." He resumed his book, brooding that he had to reject sex because of his company image.

Shilo lay back down, shocked. He seemed like such a nice guy-aside from stabbing her father- she could hardly imagine him bringing a knife down on her, threatening at her throat, slicing at her breast... come to think about it, she could imagine it. She rolled over, looking at his dark eyes, tucked under the covers, her hand wandered down to her panties and she felt around a little bit. Luigi's nose twiched.

Luigi can smell girls masturbating or something, I guess.

"Are you-?" he asked. "Did that fuckin turn you on?"

No, her vagina just itched.

"I guess" she said. Did it? What was up with that?

"Have you been cut for sex before?" he asked. There was a glimmer of hope in his voice. Maybe he would get laid tonight after all.

"I've never had sex before"

I find that hard to believe, considering she’d supposedly been hanging out with Graverobber for a while…

"Oh" he said, disappointed.

"But there has to be a first time for everything, right?" she was starting to wonder where this all was coming from, why she suddenly wanted to have sex so badly.

I’m gonna take a stab at it and guess it’s because she’s a teenager and she’s been locked in her house her whole life. Dammit, does that mean the author actually knows something about characterization? Fuck…

Yesterday Pavi promised her the time of her life, why would she go for the man that wanted to beat her?

Well, Pavi’s flamingly gay, so…

He looked at her. "I told you I can't have sex with you, it would be too much for you, especially on your first time out."

"I'm tough"

In one sharp motion he was on top of her, holding the knife from his bedside table against her throat. "You like this? Huh? Is this how you want your fucking cherry popped, scared and" he pressed the blade in gently "in pain?"

"Yes" she whispered, unsure of why.

He pulled away from her. "I'm not going to have mercy on you." he lied. This was her first time, of course he wasn't going to pull out the big guns. "Strip or leave" he turned to the cedar chest and selected a black and green leather flogger, medium weight, more thuddy than a crop or whip and less stingy.

You know, it just sunk in for me that this person seems to know quite a bit about this stuff. Either they really know what they’re talking about or they’re a really good bullshitter.

Shilo was naked and had her knees puller to her chest on the bed when he turned back around. "Lay on the bed, facedown" Pleased that she had stayed, he looked at her perfect form, and ran the tails of the flogger up and down her back a few times. Might as well get this initial one over with. He brought it down on her with about half his strength on her ass.

"Ow!" Shilo cried out. "That hurt"

"That's the fucking point, princess. Don't you look up at me you worthless peasant" he snapped. He brought it down three more times, on her shoulders, her lower back and again on her hot little ass. He picked his gloves up off his bureau and put the left one on. He smacked her butt, then put his right hand under her hips to guide them up and hold it there, giving him easier access to his target. He spanked her as one does to a child,

……………………………………………………………this person is incredibly disturbed. And not like the band.

and she stayed still, moaning only slightly. After about 15 hits, he backed up and started using the flogger like a windmill, hitting her back and going full circle to hit the same spot again and again. He sat next to her,

While still hitting her? O_o When did Luigi become Mrs. Incredible?

and pulled her face out of the mattress it was buried in to check her face. It had tears, but she looked brave as she peered into his eyes. "What did I say about looking me in the face, huh, princess?" Being denied the pleasure of looking at him was infuriating, and for some reason she loved it. She could feel her back and rear getting very warm, and even though this hurt, she wanted more, and didn't want to make him angry so he would stop.

She averted her eyes and was rewarded with "Good girl" and a pat to the head.

Shilo: Woof?

Luigi smacked her ass a few more times, till it turned a pleasing shade of pink. Then he told her to stay still while he took his clothes off, balled them up and threw them in the hamper. He went through the chest again, extracting a riding crop, a scalpel-like knife and leather cuffs for her wrists.

"We're going to play a little game. Number these, one through three. Don't talk"

She pointed to the scalpel, crop and cuffs.

"You just picked before, during, and after"he grinned at her, the lust for blood coming into his eyes. "On your back, and don't look at me till I tell you to"

Shilo closed her eyes to avoid accidents. She felt fingers around her pussy. She was visually unaware and totally defenseless when the the blade nipped into the mound of pubic hair, seeming to draw little pictures in the flesh there.

…

She could feel warm blood coming up even though the cuts were shallow and didn't hurt much more than a shot. It felt almost comforting when his mouth descended on it to suck the blood up, and then left bloodstained kisses all across her chest and belly. Her breath was shallow and slow. The knife clattered to the floor.

Then he stabbed her with a hidden knife and she died. The end.

"You can have the privilege of looking at me now, Princess." Luigi growled in a low voice. Here eyes fluttered open. He was face to face with her, staring her straight in the eye. His cock was ready, pressing at her entrance. This scared her more than any whip ever could.

I bet Luigi’s heavily compensating for something, which is why he’s so angry all the time.

"Will it hurt?" she whispered.

"Not as much" he told her. He went in slowly, pushing a little at a time until he was in her entirely. She grabbed his arms and dug her nails in, getting torn asunder for the first time was agonizing, even though she was well lubed and blood was dripping into her warm pussy. She cried out slightly, Luigi put a hand over her mouth and raised the crop, whipping it onto her thigh. She screamed and he began pumping into her, cropping her for good measure every 5 thrusts or so. All at once, he dropped the crop and let go of her mouth.

"Harder, please, fuck me harder please" she shouted. He pounded hard into her and she came harder than he imagined a virgin could. She was so far into her own heaven that she didn't so much notice the warm liquid filling her vagina.

He rolled off of her, and shoved her balled up panties in her crotch to keep sperm from spilling on his bed.

But he didn’t care about the blood?

He cleaned himself up and returned to the happy girl.

"Satisfied?" he asked, clipping the handcuffs on her.

She nodded. "It was not what I expected. Better I think"

He put a rope around the middle off the cuffs and tied it to the bedpost. "Go to sleep, Princess" he told her, flicked the light back off and went to sleep.

Excuse me while I go look for something sharp to rip my eyes out with.

Seven more chapters of this shit to go.

This post has been edited by Kuramastrassx3: Jul 22 2010, 02:09 PM

[shiroamasa]

This story was awful! I never want to read it again!