GFW and Yuna Team Up Yet Again, A DBZ Mock this time... Options

[Yunagirlamy]

Hi, guyyyysssss! Since you last saw me, I have gotten interested in Dragonball Z again. Soooooooo.... GFW and I decided to do a DBZ team mock! YAYZ!

Okayz, so I'm in bold and the colour purple and GFW is in bold and in the colour red. Hopez you enjoyz the mock! Andz the story is going to be in its original format,

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Summary: “ Shut up pan u don’t know what your saying

She really doesn’t.

Wrong your/you’re. You can tell already that this is going to be a bad story.


Summary: “ Shut up pan u don’t know what your saying!!” “YES I DO TRUNKS… I’m not a child anymore… and like I said before YOU CANT MAR-“ POP! Trunks Vegeta Briefs had slap pan..

Trunks is a pretty cool guy Eh, slaps Pan and Doesn’t afraid anything

Well, no-one had informed me that slaps go “POP!” And Trunks is ftw.

Trunks had slap his best friend, why?

He bitch slapped her, yo.

How will Pan take it?

Like a MAN!

What should she do?

I dunno, why are you asking me for?

What was Pan going to say before she got slapped? Read to find out srry I’m new to this. At first it is TM but then it goes to TP and GB

Whatty what what?

I think the author is maybe talking about countries.

“Blah”- talking

“Blah”.

Blah- thoughts

Blah.

Blah- a person’s pov or what is going on with that person and the people around them

Blah.

Age: if you wanted to know.

Well, it would be a good idea.

Bra/Bulla (I use both ): 17

REALLY?! That is SO interesting to hear!

Pan: 18
Goten: 29
Trunks: 30

Wait, lemme get this straight. In this story, I assume that Trunks ends up with Pan. So that would make Trunks a paedophile. This author is SICK!

Marron: 28

Sooooo basically fuck with Canon?

Son Pan, the ¼ sayain,

That is an unforgivable crime. Spelling "saiyan" wrong.

tomboy girl was in the HUGE ballroom, a party Bulma had announced, or should we say Trunks and her wanted every Z fighters to gather.

Huh?

I’m confused as well. Already, I can tell this will probably have fuck all to do with Dragonball Z, except for the character names.

Pan was watching everyone enjoying him or herself,

Especially Yamcha who shot up on Heroin in the corner!

Pan was just smiling seeing how happy her family and friends were.

Just smiling isn’t enough! Pleasure yourself, girl!

I didn’t know you liked such things Yuna.

Bra talking to Goten but stop, walking over to Pan having a huge grin on her face.

I really hope this author’s first language isn’t English. Cause otherwise—they’ve failed.

Pan smiled and just waved,

Why is Pan JUST doing something? Does she JUST put on her clothes? Does she JUST fly through the air? Does she JUST hide the keys to a spaceship down her top meaning Trunks can’t take them from her?

wondering why Trunks had gather this party and ask or demanded everyone to wear something really, I mean really nice on.

Well he wasn’t gonna ask them to wear a dirty towel

Maybe he was thinking of asking them to wear NOTHING, because in this story, Trunks is a perv.

Pan had watch Trunks talking to her the girl who was Pan’s best friend but no she was a backstabber, gold digger, and mostly a whore.

Y’know, I don’t have many best friends that are backstabbers, gold diggers, and mostly whores.

She only wanted Trunks for his money why couldn’t he see that cuz he was blinded by her beauty.

Oh Yay a Pan fan girl. Seriously I don’t remember Marron being a gold digger and a Whore.

Marron’s just too innocent to be a whore. And I don’t think she’d be a gold digger either. Yeah, she likes shopping, but then again, what girl doesn’t?

“Everyone I have an announcement to make!” Trunks was up on stage, next to him was her, the gold digger, the one that is giggling like crazy right now, Marron Chestnut. Anyways everyone turned his or her attention to Trunks and Marron, but mostly Pan.

Why are they paying attention to PAN? She’s not the one making an announcement.

“Well most of you know that Marron and I were dating for about 2 years now” Trunks had said having his eyes on Bra and Pan.

PERVERT!

Both shocked and stunned. Oh Dende please don’t let Trunks-kun say what I think he is going to say.

FUCKING RANDOM JAPANESE WORDS

Many thoughts ran through Pan’s head and same goes for Bra.
Bra slightly glaring at her brother giving him the look what-are-you-up-to glare.

He’s giving an announcement. DUH!

Trunks cleared his throat and continued to say whatever say he was going to say.

Saysaysaysaysaysaysaysay. See how annoying it is?

Too many says. Must… kill… self.

“Marron and I deiced to get married!”

You “deiced” to get married? Hmm… I MUST try that out one of the days.

Trunks had exclaimed and were surrounded by people congratulating him but not Vegeta he just grunted in annoyed and Bra and Pan both shocked not knowing that Pan’s friend and Bra’s Brother would sink so low.

Seriously what does this author have against Marron?

Pan ran towards the gate

Gate? Capsule Corp. doesn’t have a gate. Unless they got one built in, in this story.

and ran towards the forest to her favorite spot to think/cry.

Make up your mind. Are you thinking or crying?

She sensed Bra’s ki coming towards her but she didn’t care. She cried her heart out, she gave Trunks her heart but he just grabbed her heart, stomped on it, left it on the ground for everyone to step on it.

Mr Popo Stepped exceptionally hard then sent it to hell because he’s badass.

Hell yeah!

Bra flew next to pan hugging her tight slightly tapping Pan’s back to claim her down.

I claim you down!

“shhhhhh sweetie I know it hurts.. I know how you feel remember when Goten said he was marring someone and he still is it hurts for me to” Bra said still trying to claim down Pan. Bra loves Goten, and knows a secret that only Pan, her(Bra), Vegeta, and Piccolo.

Wait the secret is only Bra Vegeta and Piccolo? That doesn’t make sense.

This whole story doesn’t make sense.

“B… B…But B… Bra how could he marry the bimbo?!… she is…is a whore! A gold digger only using him for his money how could he not see that! Why is he sooo blind to see that I love him for sooo long!” Pan said while tried to in between sobs.

Becaaaaause you never revealed it?

She’s young. She’ll get over it. Oh wait… we ARE talking about Pan here.

“ I don’t know hun but we are going to stop him from marrying her just like we are going to stop Goten from marrying Tsuyaka (idk were I got it just go with it!). and if we don’t who knows wat will happened to us….to well you know!!” Bra half yelled half whispered.

What? Will they be murdered and raped?

And how can you half yell and half whisper something? This author has a wacked up head.

Pan just nodded her head crying and started to fly towards a cave with Bra. There they were going to sleep,they only did that when they were really upset.

Oh, what a great idea! The next time, I’ll go sleep in a cave like a tramp! Yes, that will make everything better!

Bra hated her brother for hurting Pan and Tsuyaka from marrying Goten she was just a whore and gold digger

also (the son’s are rich too) while Pan hated her uncle

Wait what?

and Marron being a backstabber, a whore and a for marrying Trunks just for his money. They changed into their pj’s that were at the cave,

They sleep regularly in the cave? What the hell?

They’re tramps. Face the facts.

set down their sleeping bag and start to sleep or cried to sleep (that was pan) or tried to sleep (that was bra cuz she was thinking about Goten and Tsuyaka and Trunks and Marron)

Then why didn’t you just say that? Oh wait, I forgot… you can’t write!

That’s it I got nothing else I’m srry if it is short I’m not use to write on I was use to write on okie dokie bye bye for now

You Fail.

Epic fail!!!

This post has been edited by Yunagirlamy: Mar 6 2009, 11:48 AM

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I hate fanfiction that exists solely to fulfill a particular ship, but then again I hate most fanfiction in general.