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Regular Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 57 Joined: 22-June 12 Member No.: 666 Gender: Male |
Jun 27 2012, 08:02 PM
Hey guys, I know I'm working on the Christmas Carol mock right now, but it was getting a little bit boring. I mean, it's just a Muppet rip-off. So I decided to also do something new! Something original! Something...batshit insane. The Land Before Time category has some weirdass stories in it, but one of the strangest ones I've found is part of the "Revenge" series, an unfinished trilogy by LBTFan13. Here we go...
Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN THE LAND BEFORE TIME CHARACTERS, SETTINGS, SONGS, ETC... TIS APPLIES TO THE ENTIRE STORY The Land Before Time Revenge ...of the angry parents who had to buy all the sequels. Prologue It was a stormy night in the Mysterious Beyond. Many sharpteeth were running about, looking for their families and trying to get out of the down pouring rain. Lightning lit the sky as two fliers desperately flew to the safety of Hanging Rock. The wind fought them for what seemed like hours even though it only took them two minutes to reach the cavern. Once underneath the rock, they shook their wings dry and looked at each other. Although both the same size, one was a light brown color while the other a somewhat dark pink. "I'm getting sick and tired of this weather," the pink flier complained. "Why can't we find a place with no sky water?" Get used to these cutesy terms. It's more of a fault with the series itself than with the writer. "Quit your whining," the other flier scolded. "We only have to deal with this just a little bit longer. It won't be long now until we return back to the Great Valley." "Yeah, and then we can get our revenge on those bratty children once and for all!" The pink flier began to laugh maniacally a little. "What's the plan anyway?" The brown flier stared at him. "You forgot already Rinkus?" "No I didn't Sierra!" Rinkus objected. "I'm just too excited, that's all." "And we need some exposition!" "Well, it can't hurt," Sierra agreed. "Ok then. Why are we here?" Rinkus thought for a moment. "Because Don Bluth can't catch a break!" "We were forced here, by those pesky little hatchlings." Sierra nodded "That's right. There was one spiketail, that annoying big mouth we kidnapped before, one threehorn, Pterano's nephew, and that longneck. It's because they foiled our plot to get the Stone of Cold Fire that we ended up here. Now then, what are we going to do to them?" "We're gonna hurt them!" Rinkus exclaimed. "We're gonna make them suffer!" "Especially the longneck," Sierra pointed out. "I will personally take great pride in toying with him." Sierra began an evil laugh, and then Rinkus joined in. To Be Continued… Yeah, it's a short chapter, but I have something I need to say regarding these two: This whole thing was their own damn fault. Littlefoot and his friends had next to nothing to do with them. If you haven't seen the movie, these two were convinced by their (now redeemed) leader Pterano that a meteorite could give them magical powers or some crap like that. They kidnap Ducky for some reason, dragging Littlefoot and the others into the mess. Then the meteorite explodes in the villains' faces, sending them flying. Why are they pissed at Littlefoot so much? If anything, they should be mad at Pterano for having such an asinine idea! But more on that in the following chapters... |
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