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post May 31 2016, 04:16 PM
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Title: Katerina's Journey
Author: animelover627
Fandom(s): Pokemon
Genre(s): Adventure/friendship
Pairing(s): The author hasn't specified, unless there's some minor shipping much later.
Short summary: Apparently, animelover627 thought it would be a good idea to insert game logic into an anime they haven't seen for years. Anyway, I'm surprised this one hasn't been mocked. At the time of writing this, this fic has a scary 99 chapters of suck. Now, for such a long fic, you'll expect hundreds of glowing reviews from the morons over at FF.net. Well, almost all the reviews are negative. Yes, you read that correctly. Even the FF.net users DISLIKE this story. Granted, most of them are anonymous flamers, but still. What they say is still true.
Mature content: n/a
Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11069354/1/Katerina-s-journey


Seriously? FF.net users dislike this story and it has 99 Chapters?

How is that possible?

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post Jun 20 2016, 01:03 PM
Title: Poison
Author: BlackGargie
Fandom(s): Osmosis Jones
Genre(s): Hurt/Comfort/Romance
Pairing(s)? Ozzy/Thrax. OC/OC
Short summary: Thrax somehow survives his death and takes Ozzy as a slave.
Mature content? (Y/N) YES.
Link here.

Title: I'm broken....but I'm fine.
Author: aace1234
Fandom(s): RPF, One Direction
Genre(s) Angst/Romance
Pairing(s)? Louis Tomlinson/Harry Styles. Niall Horan/Andy Samuels
Short summary: Louis becomes an edgy teenager and his stepbrother fucks helps the edge out of him.
Mature content? (Y/N): Yes.
Link here.

Title: Leo's Legacy
Author: KerryAnne
Fandom(s): TMNT
Genre(s): Angst/Romance
Pairing(s)? Leo/Raphael
Short summary: Leo gets terminal cancer and Raph has kids with him. What is going on.
Mature content? (Y/N) YES.
Link here.

I do have another Osmosis Jones fanfiction but it's technically a 'RP.' I don't know if that counts for suggestion. Actually, never mind. I'm adding it and I'll probably do it because it's so long.

Title: The One You Left Behind
Author: BlackGargie/IllusionEverStar and someone else.
Fandom(s): Osmosis Jones
Genre(s): Hurt/Comfort/Romance/Horror
Pairing(s)? Ozzy/Thrax. OC/OC Drix/Leah
Short summary: Thrax rapes Ozzy TWICE and the two fall in love after it turns out that Thrax's alter ego raped Ozzy and it really wasn't Thrax. Includes Gary Stu OCs.
Mature content? (Y/N) YES.
Link here/posts START here.

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post Oct 6 2016, 03:24 PM
Title: Yearnings of the Heart
Author: Epicdudejo. edited by Dinobunni
Fandom(s): Dungeons & Dragons
Genre(s): Romance
Pairing(s)? OC/OC
Short summary: Two self-insert characters share a night of passion after a particularly hard day
Mature content? (Y/N) YES.
Link here
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post Nov 7 2016, 05:51 AM
Because I haven't posted anything on this thread in a while.

Title: Yu-Gi-Oh! EQG
Author: blueeyeswhitedragon0
Fandom: MLP FiM // Yu-Gi-Oh!
Genre: Gore/Adventure/Crossover/AU
Summary: "For as he long as he could remember, Burst Stream has been having dreams about duel monsters creatures. In specific, the one he sees the most is the legendary blue eyes white dragon. Ever since the card was put back into production, he has felt a bond between himself and the ace card of his deck. Going to CHS, Burst has made many friends and rivals through the card game. But dark forces are looming on the horizon, and a new duelist legend is about to begin! It's time to duel!"
Link: here

This is the first on a series of crossovers between YGO and Equestria Girls starring the author's self-insert. They're all awfully short by virtue of three things. One, a total lack of descriptions, two, most of the plots copy pasted from Yu-Gi-Oh! and, three, the duels. Basically, the gap between the characters' decks, particularly when it comes to the protagonist, is so big it that it's like reading about a thirty-something dude playing with a ten years-old kid. For example, the self-insert uses a competitive Blue-Eyes deck that has won tournaments and costs around six hundred bucks to build; the main bad guy? Motherfucking Dark Master Zorc.

Seriously, this author makes Mykan's "Dueling Drama" series look good by comparison.
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post Nov 8 2016, 05:26 PM
Like with Dashguy, I haven't posted anything on here for quite some time. Well have I got a surprise for you...

Author: Mask Rider Roy

Stories: ANY of his Danganronpa stories; with the exception of Enoshima's Erotic Escapades, Danganronpa: Truth or Dare and The Luckster and the Detective. (The first two were mocked by yours truely, while the third one is getting mocked by AnItalianGuy)

Summary: This guy is an enigma and a half, what with most of his M rated stories featuring him in a Naegi skinsuit, hilariously incompetent writing, the same arrogant villain being used through out all of his fics, and the sheer amount of boredom contained in them. The fact that this creep barely gets any negative reviews, goes to show how moronic fanfic readers are.

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QUOTE (AnItalianGuy @ May 27 2016, 02:03 AM) *
Jesus man what is up with you and all of those waifus! Are you secretly the "Ultimate Pimp"?
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post Dec 13 2016, 07:55 PM
I'm not sure of this story counts as "bad" its got good grammar and writting... but jesus.. I can see a lot of issues in this story..

So I'm not sure if this counts as bad fanfic, because I might just mock it. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11016292/1/The-Remnant-Campaign

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post Dec 23 2016, 12:41 PM
QUOTE (Firestarter09 @ Dec 13 2016, 07:55 PM) *
I'm not sure of this story counts as "bad" its got good grammar and writting...

"During the 1st battle of Harvest in 2526 John-117 is nearly killed during combat and taken out until further notice. After a series of events though, the UNSC Everest discovers an unknown planet. The strangest part of it all is that it hasn't been touched by Covenant as of Yet. John's orders have changed from fighting on Harvest to entering the world."

No it doesn't.
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post Dec 26 2016, 03:18 PM
QUOTE (UltimateIRS @ Dec 23 2016, 12:41 PM) *
"During the 1st battle of Harvest in 2526 John-117 is nearly killed during combat and taken out until further notice. After a series of events though, the UNSC Everest discovers an unknown planet. The strangest part of it all is that it hasn't been touched by Covenant as of Yet. John's orders have changed from fighting on Harvest to entering the world."

No it doesn't.


oh... yeah not the best at grammar.... so Ima go mock it.
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post Dec 27 2016, 05:18 AM
Title: Experiment of the dead
Author: Kyuubi-gear
Fandom: Highschool of the Dead
Genre: Adventure/Supernatural
Pairing: (OC x Rei x Saya x Saeko x Shizuka)
Summary: The fic is essentially the plot of the manga/anime, but with a Gary-Stu that can control lightning. The grammar is easily, some of the worst I have ever seen, and the dialogue is so goddamn boring and robotic.
Rating: T
Link: Here


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post Jan 23 2017, 04:39 PM
Title: Kira's story of domination.
Author: EclipsePheniox
Fandom: Mass effect
Genre: None
Pairing: (Shepard (F), Miranda L., Aria T'Loak, Ashley W)
Summary: A sad attempt of amazon futa/ erotica... or something... this story gets stupider and stupider each chapter.
Rating: M
Link: Here
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post Feb 2 2017, 04:09 PM
Is it okay to mock something that you like?


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post Feb 2 2017, 06:02 PM
I don't see why not, so long as you can make it funny. The premise of this site when MoA started it seems to have been "all fanfiction is bad, now here's comedic appraisals of that." So long as you keep that in mind, I think it's really up to you.



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post Feb 16 2017, 01:35 AM
50-ти летие великолепной и грандиозной системы Nikon F 20 июня 2009г. рис 1. Но правильный подход подразумевает освещение хромакейного фона. Leica Ig 1957 год. Например, фирма " Корнинг Гласе Интернешнл" насчитывает в своем каталоге свыше 100000 различных стекломатериалов, в том числе и оптических сортов стекла, которые отличаются от массы дру­гих разновидностей изощренной технологией производства к образуют особую высокоэлитную группу. Leica I Anastigmat 1:3,5 (Model A) 1925 год. Просветленный Cуммикрон 50 мм f2 военного времени с маркировкой о принадлежности германским вооруженным силам. В 1949 г. Nikon F с серийным номером 6400027 (отсчёт начался от 6400001) рис 3. в поперечнике) встречаются редко, да и всевозможные их изъяны для оптических заготовок, как правило, непригодны. Пользоваться Rogue Small Positionable Reflector легко и приятно. Невозможно перечислить производимые промышленностью сорта стек­ла. Вес объек­тива - 220 грамм. Первые буклеты и технические описания Nikon F Мы так же не захотели остаться в стороне от этих событий, правда, в Токио не выезжали. 52 000 шт. Самой интересной моделью является Leica II (D) с резьбовым креплением сменной оптики, встроенным дальномером, сопряжённым с объективами от 35 до 135 мм (включая ряд светосильных 50-мм объективов), отдельными окулярами для визирования и определения дистанции, выдержками от 1/500 до 1/20 с и характерными обводами корпуса. Так с 1 января 1911 года и до конца своей жизни Барнак проработал на фирме Leitz.

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post Feb 22 2017, 12:56 PM
Title: Von's Life
Author: Chance Green G King
Fandom/Cartoon: Star vs the Forces of Evil
Genre: I really don't know, but I think its adventure/romance
Pairing: OC/Star Butterfly

Short Summary (In my own words): A Dragon boy along with the cheshire cat from Alice in Wonderland go to earth to spend time with Marco and Star.

Defining flaws: A arrogant author coupled with a grammar-ladled mess.

the Link is here


I have another one too biggrin.gif

Title: Yu-Gi-Oh! - The one who knows all
Author: Sprogster98
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh! GX
Genre: Duel Monsters Power Fantasy

Short summary (In my own words): A guy who knows how to pendulum, Synchro, Ritual and XYZ Summon goes to duel Academy despite being in the GX era, you know, the era of where three of the summoning methods that I just mentioned didn't even existed yet, by the by, he also just nonchalantly-showed off the Three Egyptian God Cards.

Defining flaws: Terrible Marty-sue of an Original Character, terrible, boring arse duels, and an Author who excuses all of his ineptitude by stating that he intentionally did made these flaws.

Right here if you want to use it.

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post Mar 15 2017, 09:51 AM
Title: Yu-Gi-Oh GX: The God Duelist!
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh GX unironically
Genre: Self-insert power fantasy
Main Defining flaw: Terrible Writing, terrible OC's and a plethora of them, coupled with an Author who can't handle any form of criticism whatsoever

Summary in my own words: An OC who's personally been given Slifer the Sky Dragon by Yugi Muto goes to duel Academy, replaying the GX storyline but with his OC and his other terrible OC.

The fanfiction

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post Mar 15 2017, 01:16 PM
Not only is the weird Russian post still there, but somehow or another the bot responsible for it got a Butter's avatar and set it up.

I'm impressed how committed the people involved are to trying to blend in.


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post May 24 2017, 08:27 AM
Fanfiction: One Night Stand?
Writer: Fallen Pens
Fandom: The Loud House
Genre: Soft-core Incest Porn Romance

Main Defining Flaw: Soft-Core Incest Porn Romance with pregnancy, all with a fanbase who approves of this trash

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12471817/1/One-Night-Stand


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post Jun 29 2017, 08:23 PM
Shattered Innocence By: AustinDR

Fandom: Loud House what do you expect?

Genre: Melodramtic Wangst

Main Defining flaw: Look above if you please, coupled with an mental author who has some major self-confidence issues but he enjoys guilt-tripping people about it, and the whole community defends him despite this

Here is the link fams

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12415899/1/Shattered-Innocence


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