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![]() Also known as FDR ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,338 Joined: 12-February 10 From: Some place you've probably never been to Member No.: 329 Gender: Male |
Apr 14 2011, 02:29 PM
Well, while searching for the latest shitfic for me to mock, I found out about this fellow named laprasking. Now, you may be asking yourself why I'm dedicating an entire thread to his fics. I'm not going to lie, this guy may be one of the oddest individuals I've come across in my search for bad Fan Fiction, and I've read this. Granted, this isn't as bad as that... I hope. But what shocks me is the nature of these fics. The best I can say is that you may either be disgusted or incredibly turned on depending on your preferences. Prepare for either eventuality accordingly.
Now, while there is no doubt in my mind that all of his fics are bad, I'll be focusing more on the... Er... Odder ones. This is going to be a bit of work, so if anyone wants to pitch in in any way, feel free to offer. This first one is called "Psyduck's Revenge". You can probably guess where this is going. Revenge of Psyduck It was closing time for the Cerulean Gym, and Gym Leader Misty was ready to call it a day. She had just gotten her ass kicked by another kid who hacked his game into awesome. She returned her Water Pokemon to their Pokeballs, while thanking them for a great day. She care for all her Pokemon, treating them with respect and kindness, like her friends. Well, expect one. Struggling to get out of the pool, Psyduck was flapping his arms in panic trying to pull itself towards the end of the pool. "You dumb fuck Misty reached out to pull Psyduck out the pool, only to be pulled in herself by Psyduck. Oh, that Psyduck and his wacky hijinks. Not that she minded the pool, far from it, but to be pulled in like that really angered her. Once out the pool, Misty and Psyduck dried themselves with some towels. "You can make yourself useful and carry those boxes over." Psyduck made its way towards the boxes containing Gym supplies, which had arrived earlier in the day. Trying to impress Misty for a change, Psyduck tried to carry 5 boxes at once. However, by doing so he could not see where he was going and the boxes were slowly tipping. Soon enough, Psyduck tripped and fell back into the pool with the boxes. *Insert laugh track here* Misty reentered the pool area to find the gym supplies and Psyduck in the pool. In anger, Misty pulled the clumsy duck out the pool and slapped him hard. "YOU STUPID DUCK! LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE, YOU'VE RUINED THE SUPPLIES! NOW WE'VE GOT TO ORDER MORE. GOD, WHY THE HELL DO I PUT UP WITH? Poor Misty is so mad that she forgot what she puts up with. Also, the end quotes. Psyduck looked teary eyed as Misty exploded at him. "YOU KNOW WHAT, EITHER EVOLVE OR JUST DIE, WHATEVER'S THE QUICKEST, I'VE JUST HAD ENOUGH OF YOU!" Misty left the room and headed to her bedroom. Psyduck remained at the pools, still crying as he stirred at his reflection. Night soon followed, and Psyduck was still at the same point, just looking at his reflection. "Its not my fault I'm so clumsy and useless." Psyduck thought to himself depressed. "If it wasn't for this headache of mine, I could think clearly, You mean that thing you're doing just fine right now? but instead I can't do the simplest thing in this state. Maybe Misty's right, maybe I'm better off dead..." As the tears continued flowing, they suddenly started to glow white. Soon enough, Psyduck's whole body began to glow. "Could it be? Can this really be happening?" It was finally happening, Psyduck was evolving! As Psyduck was glowing, his whole body was changing shape, changing his colour, and changing Psyduck completely. Congratulations! Your PSYDUCK has evolved into UGLY DUCKLING! Psyduck stopped glowing. He looked at his reflection. At last, he was no longer the useless Psyduck, he was now a strong and powerful Golduck! "YES!" Golduck thought to himself. "I feel so alive! No more do I have to put of with that curse of a headache! I can use all sorts of attacks and impress Misty and..." It was then, Golduck remembered all the horrible things she said to him. "Hey, am I really going to left her get away with that? She made me feel so bad earlier and I nearly wanted to die! She HAS to pay!" Golduck looked at his feet and saw what looked like his old Psyduck skin, only different, it looked like it was made of latex. I'm more concerned about the possibility that this means he shed his skin, which was made of latex. Science will be baffled. "...this gives me an idea." The next morning, Misty woke up feeling bad. She felt that way after saying those mean things to Psyduck. She would never explode like that to anyone (Well, except maybe Ash) or any of her Pokemon. She had put up with Psyduck's clumsiness for so long that it built up and up, until she finally blew it. She knew she'd have to apologize to him. Misty walked to the swimming pool in her nightgown, as she heard someone swimming. She looked to see a blue figure doing laps up and down the pool. "Psyduck?" she said slightly dazed in her sleep. The figure the swam to Misty and swiftly jumped out the pool. It was then Misty realized it was not Psyduck. "Golduck? Then that means...oh my god! You evolved!" Misty walked up to her Golduck and hug him. "Oh wow, you look so much better! You're gonna be great at battles and such." Misty go so caught up in her new Pokemon, she forgot to apologize. Perhaps if she said sorry at the get go, Golduck would of accepted it and go easy on her. But that won't give the good readers of laprasking their boners, now would it? Golduck's eyes began to glow and a psychic glow appeared around Misty, forcing her to stand up. "Hey Golduck, what are you doing?" asked a concerned Misty. Misty tried to move but could not. Golduck look pretty mad, and was going to take it all out on Misty by ultimately humiliating her. Misty's arms rose and her hands placed on her shoulders. She pulled down the straps to her nightgown, causing it to drop to the floor, revealing Misty's naked body. Ok, I won't lie, this part is kind of hot. "HEY, DON'T DO THAT-" Misty wanted to cover herself, but no matter how hard she tried, her arms would not budge. Instead, her arms lowered to her breasts where her hands cupped onto them and started playing with them. "No...AH. Don't!" Misty's hands moved her breasts about, while squeezing them and using her fingers by force to tease her nipples. Not long last, her left arm moved down and her hand began stroking her already wet pussy. Soon enough, she was fingering herself. "Oh god, AHHH, AHH." Oh no. She's being forced to touch her self. The horror. Ahhhhh. "Its not use." Golduck thought to himself. "With my psychic abilities, I can read your mind like a book! Because of our bound, I knew exactly what turns you on, where you love to be "touched", and how often you masturbate, thinking of your "Ashy boy"!" "This can't be happening, AHH, AHHH, AHHH!" Misty's mouth was as wet as her pussy as drool escaped her mouth, unable to close it properly. With Golduck being the expert on her body, she was sweating like crazy and burning with passion and embarrassment from playing with herself in front of one of her Pokemon. Thank god her sisters weren't around, though the pool CCTV was capturing all the "action". And this madness hasn't been stopped yet? Damn, Big Brother is either lagging behind or is taking his coffee break. Either way, I'm disappointed in him. I would expect more from an omnipresent fictional authoritarian figure. With that, Misty soon came to the pleasure. "AHHH, AHHHHHHH, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" She wanted to collapse on the floor, but her legs would not left her. Instead, her left hand lifted up to her mouth as her fingers inserted into her mouth, forcing her pussy juices into her mouth. Pussy juices? Is that the technical term for it, or...? "Please." peddled Misty once her fingers left her mouth. "Left me go, and I'll forget this ever happened Golduck, please!" Forgot? Blah, Golduck would certainly not forget all the pain. Instead, this was only the beginning. Golduck forced Misty to walk towards his old Psyduck skin. "W-What the hell is that?" That's what I'd like to know. Really, it's a mystery that must be solved. Misty blend down to grab the latex skin. She then stepped into the open break and pulled it up. To her horror, Misty witness the latex fit her long smooth legs as she stretched it up like putting on some tights. Once her legs were in, she stretched it more so that her waist and ass were enclosed into the tight latex. Just above her ass was a Psyduck tail, which frighten Misty more. OH GOD NOT A TAIL "PLEASE NO!" She then stretched the skin just below her boobs, where she inserted her arms into the skin, and fitted them into the arms, pulling them in, stretching them so that her arms would fit in perfectly. Wiggling about, she got the skin to cover her breasts and move up to her neck. The beck covered her head, and her head looked up towards the ceiling lights. It looked like Misty was being eaten by the skin. "Help me!" Darkness soon following as the beck closed. Misty could feeling the head part moving about so that her eyes were level with the suit's once empty eyes and her mouth was in the right place for the beck. What's a beck? Shortly, Misty could see again, and move her body. She looked a Golduck, who had a big evil smile on its face, and feared the worst. She looked at her reflection in the water, only so see that familiar, mindless expression look back at her. Her head now reassembled a Psyduck's, only it looked like latex. Her once sky blue eyes and long red hair had been replaced by white oval eyes and 3 black hairs on top of her head. Looking down at her body, she looked like a Psyduck with a human female body but made of latex. This is simultaneously too in-depth and too stupid for it to make sense. You know, as much sense as this situation can possibly make. "NO!" Said a horrified Misty. She was more horrified to see her beck move when she spoke, as the beck had now attached to her lips and jaw. Looking at her body more, she noticed her nipples sticking out and her "tail" moving on her accord, while her ass stood out as always! She also had near invisible holes for toilet and other duties. Misty struggled to get the skin off, but could not. Her fingers and toes had become webbed, just like a Psyduck's. "Golduck! Get this off of me!" "Hmm, not bad." thought Golduck. "But there's room for improvement." Translation: More horror to come. Or pleasure, as the case may be. Golduck's eyes began to glow again. Misty hoped he was getting the skin off, but she felt pain in her chest as her breasts expanded to the size of small water melons! Her ass grew slightly bigger too, she was one sexy looking human shaped Psyduck alright! "Much better." thought Golduck. "In future, I can make your boobs and ass any size I want. Hell, if I feel like it, I can give you a cock for laughs!" That's not funny. "Golduck, please release me! I'm so sorry!" "Too late for that now bitch." thought Golduck. "Time to rob you of your last human quality." "Please, I'm so, Psyduck. Ok, that's just stupid. Psy Psy Psyduck!" Misty parsed. All that was coming out of her mouth was "Psyduck"! Her once angelic voice had now degraded to the horrid Psyduck screeches that once annoyed her! "Psyduck? PSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYDUCK!" Now Misty had lost the last thing that made her Misty, her voice. Looking at her now, you could not tell it was her. Golduck's eyes glew again, force Misty down on all fours. "Psy Psyduck? (What are you doing?)" asked Misty. Misty looked in horror as Golduck unleashed his 13 inch member from between his legs. Misty feared where it would be going as Golduck made his way towards Misty's ass. Golduck proceeded to insert his cock into her pussy, sliding it slowly, before jamming the whole thing in swiftly. INTERSPECIES RAPE SO SEXY He then began to move back and forth, stroking Misty's pussy walls with his cock. The sensation made Misty's face glow bright red as she was going turned out by Golduck's huge cock fucking her brains out. "PSY, PSY, PSY, PSY!" As Golduck continued, Misty got wetter and hotter downstairs ![]() as Golduck increased in speed. Soon enough, Misty had the biggest orgasm she had ever experienced. "PSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYDUCK..." Once Golduck had moved back, taking his cock out, Misty wanted to collapse in exhaustion, but Golduck did not let her. Instead, he walked towards her face and looked into her eyes. "Now that your mind is weakened, I can began the final stage of your downfall." thought Golduck. You're going to lay siege to Berlin? Golduck unleashed a powerful hypnosis attack onto Misty, one that would keep her into a permanent trance. Misty's eyes gave an empty stare at Golduck, as her mind was being emptied, ready for new memories and commands to be programed. "You are no longer the trainer or master!" said Golduck via telephony. "You are now the pet, obeying my commands, no matter how perverted. Oh yay. You were never a human, you were always a Pokemon, even though your body is shaped like a human's, you never question that. Yes, you are the Pokemon Psyduck, you've never heard of the trainer Misty. You are quite dumb and clumsy. It doesnt bother you, you are quite the bimbo. You don't even know how to swim, you sink like a rock. In fact, it turns you on when you make mistakes, you get quite aroused by this. You love sex, you love to have sex with Golduck, but you offer yourself to other wild Pokemon to see to fuck you. You don't like fucking humans, you only get off from fucking Pokemon. Yes, this is all your life revolves around, your only purpose in life. Obeying is good, Pokemon fucking is good." Meanwhile, proper use of the English language is bad, apparently. With that, Misty's mind was set. Gone was the Cerulean Gym Leader and born was Psyduck, the sex freak Pokemon. Drool dripped from her mouth, as she starred at Golduck's still erect cock. "Now, suck my cock!" demanded Golduck via telephony. Psyduck proceeded as she inserted the cock into her beck. For the next hour, she gave Golduck a number of blowjobs and used her breasts to get titty fucked with her now bigger boobs. "Yes, this is going to work out just right. Many days later, Misty's sisters returned to the gym to find their little sister missing, and the gym CCTV busted beyond repair. When Big Brother makes a mistake, no one finds out about it. They tried her cell, only to find it ringing in her room. They tried to call her friends, but none knew where she was. Soon enough, the Officer Jennys got involved. Nobody could find her, she had just vanished. In a lake, at an unknown destination, lay a huge duck nest made of twigs and sticks. Golduck was relaxing, smiling at the new better life he was living. Splashing towards the nest, Psyduck returned, with something in her beck. She wore inflatable arm things to help her, though the lake was quite shallow. "Psy Psy Psyduck (I've returned with food!" said Misty, dropping something down. "Golduck Gol (Thats a rock silly)." replied Golduck. "Duck, Psy Psyduck (Doh, I'm sucha idiot!") You should become an hero, right now. "Golduck, Duck Golduck? (Indeed you are, wanna have sex?)" "Psyduck! (Yes Master!)". Golduck smiled as Psyduck placed herself ontop of Golduck, with his cock all the way into her pussy, getting so aroused by the heat. "Who's the stupid duck now, bitch?" Me, I guess, for actually reading this whole thing. The End Well, there you go. That's what's to be expected from this guy. And he has more, so we're going to be at this for awhile. -------------------- "If you want a vision of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a human face - forever."
-George Orwell "i aint gay i just want to fap to girl with giant boobs and cock fucking another girl. strapon is a decent substitute but i prefer the moneyshot to be one girl jizzing into the face of the other." -Abraham Lincoln |
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![]() Hyper Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 941 Joined: 18-November 09 Member No.: 313 Gender: Male |
Apr 14 2011, 03:19 PM
Well that was fucked up beyond repair. Why people are turned on by this shit I'll never know.
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![]() BOOP! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 402 Joined: 2-March 11 From: Smalbany Member No.: 447 Gender: Female |
Apr 14 2011, 04:14 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...oh god, what did I just read? D:
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![]() Play ball! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 674 Joined: 2-December 10 From: Hell Member No.: 413 Gender: Male |
Apr 14 2011, 04:19 PM
I must be immune to this fic! Because I was laughing all the way through! See, I've beat you! Who's the stupid duck now, loser?
-------------------- QUOTE (Josey the Dark Purveyor of Funk) Woah, baby! Time to get the funk out! |
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![]() Picker, Grinner, Lover, Sinner. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 860 Joined: 30-November 10 From: the creative minds that brought you "Spaceballs"... Member No.: 412 Gender: Male |
Apr 14 2011, 04:27 PM
This fic is like kicking someone in the nuts. At first you're like "PFFFHAHAHAHAHA" and then you're all like "Haha...ha...the hell did I just do...?"
-------------------- You've heard of the Sierra Madre Casino. We all have, the legend, the curses. Some foolishness about it lying in the middle of a City of Dead. A city of Ghosts. Beneath a blood-red cloud...a bright, shining monument reaching out, luring treasure hunters to their doom. An illusion. A promise that you can change your fortunes. Begin again.
Finding it, though, that's not the hard part. It's letting go. QUOTE (Ryan King @ from "Go On") A player I don't care about on a team I really don't care about dropped a ball last night and I couldn't sleep. It's easy to care about things that matter - war, hunger, pestilence...is that a thing? Pestilence. Pestilence...pestilence. I see it as a triumph of the human spirit to be able to care so completely about something frivelous. |
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![]() Also known as FDR ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,338 Joined: 12-February 10 From: Some place you've probably never been to Member No.: 329 Gender: Male |
Apr 15 2011, 11:39 AM
Well, I promised there would be more, so here's this thing called "After a Mawile", which is bad enough due to the stupid pun that is it's title. Knowing laprasking, however, I'm sure it's much worse than that.
After a Mawile... Deep within a dark unknown room were a group of Pokemon trainers, all wearing dark cloaks concealing their identities, stood in a circle. It's the Cult of Digimon. They had all ranged to meet up for a top secret meeting to unleash a secret plan they had been organizing for some time now. Operation Barbarossa? "I trust we all here?" asked one trainer. "Just about, Clair refused to take part after saying our plan was "pointless and stupid"." replied another. We can only assume that she was right. "Very well then, we shall deal with her later. For now, I'd like to thank you all for coming. You all know why we are here, and what we set out to achieve." "We do." "Right then, has the...boy, been captured?" "All too easy." Two trainers wheeled in a boy, strapped to some kind of metal frame. The boy was hooded to hide the location he was in, but otherwise kept clothed, gagged, and unharmed. Upon removing the hood from the boy, he looked dazed, slowly opening his eyes to the blinding light that stung his eyes. Light? But I thought the room was dark. I guess laprasking was too busy masturbating to think of silly things like logic. "Mrrrgh?" moaned the boy through his gag. "Let's get that gag off of you." said one trainer, removing the ball gag as promised. "What the hell Misty?" coughed the boy as the gag came out. "Where are we, and why did you knock me out cold?" The trainers removed their cloaks, revealing who they were. "Ash." spoke Misty. "I did all those things because of YOU." "What?" asked a confused Ash. My sentiments exactly. "After all we've been though, we all thought you would of cared how we felt about you, but instead you ignored us and made out that we were just merely "friends"". Said May. "I don't understand." "I was most hurt." said Anabel. "I clearly gave you the right signals that I had feelings towards you, but you were more concerned over my Frontier Symbol." So we're supposed to be mad at Ash because he hasn't hit puberty yet? "Anabel..." "I even acted like you to show you we had something in common!" said Dawn. "You did?" "I...havent been with you long, but hearing what these "friends" of yours had to say made me feel bad for them." said Iris. "You really ARE just a child." No, really? He's what, ten? "That's not true..." "Enough of this." commanded Erika. "Clearly you hurt most of these girls, which has led them to join my new organization to fight our common cause." "Organization?" Does this mean they've started the world of Pokemon's first Feminist movement? Sabrina and Whitney pulled down a certain in front of Ash to reveal a giant logo featuring all sorts of cute Pokemon and the words Team Cleansing. "...Team Cleansing?" asked Ash. Even the characters in the Fan Fic think it's stupid. "Yes." replied Erika. "Our goal is to remove the veil men from this world and create a new world populated with woman and Pokemon. With science and technology, it is now possibly to give birth to female only babies without the need of a man, so our goal is more then possible. It will soon be a reality, and the world will be a much better place without your kind." Heil Eva! "So you're going to kill all the men?" "Don't be daft, we're not THAT cruel and graphic." said Jasmine as she injected a substance within a needle into Ash's neck. "Oww, what the?" "Remove him from his binds." commanded Erika. Jasmine did as instructed, causing Ash to fall on all fours. The boy was in pain, whatever was injected into him was spreading through his bloodstream and veins, ultimately changing his whole D.N.A structure. God, thoroughly pissed off, threw down a few lightning bolts, and caused a few earthquakes for good measure. The End Ash looked up at his captures, as his eye sight began to blur. "What...has you done to me?" said a frightened Ash. WHAT THE FUCK HAS YOU DONE TO HIM? WE HAS TO NO. "See for yourself." smiled Erika. As his vision cleared, the changes were becoming more obvious. His arms began to shrink in length, while fingers fused from five into three, and darken until there were black, with a bit of yellow on the upper arms. This is where your tax dollars are going, folks. Looking behind him, Ash's eyes widened as his legs and torso were shrinking too. Ash went from a fine 5'00 to a tiny 2'00 in height, causing him to slip out of his jeans and shirt. Toes fusing into his feet, now black. Yellowing coverings resembling a dress or bellbottom pants now grew out of his now yellow hips right down to his tiny feet. Ash was in pain the whole time from his bone structure bending and twisting into his new form, causing him to hold his head, like the worst headache he ever experienced. If this is what they're going to do to all the men, they make the Nazi Party look like the Boy Scouts. "AAAAAAARRRRRGGGHHHH! MAKE IT STOP! MAKE IT STOP!" He cried, until he felt something within his hair. A stone? No, something shape. What. He began to fell more of these as he felt the rest of his hair. Before he knew it, a gentle bite hurt his hands. "OWWW! WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?" More pain jolted through his head. It felt like his head was growing in size and in a way, it was. A huge black toothy set of jaws with a yellow dot on top grow from the back of his head, snapping on its own accord like some wild animal. As the transformation was completing, Ash's face turned yellow as well, and tears flowed from his eyes as his hair fell out, and a black flap grow from his forehead. Whatever remained of the former Ash Ketchum was now gone, only leaving a Mawile standing on top of his old human clothes. "M-M-M-Mawile?" cried the former human, his voice now sounding more feminine. Mawile?" "See, our goal is to turn the male population into cute Pokemon." explained Erica. "And not just that, but into female cute Pokemon as well!" Makes perfect sense to me, what's your problem? "And we also thought it would teach you a lesson." said Dawn. "Now, people will look away from your hideous looking self, and you can see how you female "friends" have felt." "And only your owners will ever love you back." Oh wow, slavery, too? This is starting to turn into some sort of Orwellian nightmare. Only with Pokemon and bad grammar. smiled Anabel, as she and Misty picked up Mawile. "From now on, me and Misty will have co-ownership of you!" Ash could not believe this was happening, feeling humiliated, scared, and eyes flooded with tears. Her human life was taken away from him by the people he called his friends, and now never going to be a Pokemon Master, but merely just a Pokemon for their twisted vision, and a female one at that too. She loved Pokemon so much, but felt like a monster at her appearance. An effect of her gender change? Possible. So many things going through her mind, like what would Misty and Anabel do with her, how would her mother feel never seeing her again, how would she be fluent in the Pokemon language, what on earth would a Pokeball feel like? Life was never going to be the same again. "D'aww, think we better cheer you up." smiled Misty as she took out a Pokeball from her pocket, unleashing the Pokemon inside. "Riolu!" chanted the cheerful blue Pokemon. If you haven't already, I suggest you get the kids out of the room, along with yourself. This isn't going anywhere that's good. Misty and Anabel placed Mawile in front of the Riolu. She took a good look at the happy blue Pokemon in front of her, feeling unusual as she did. What was this she was feeling now? Now longer sad, she was feeling happy, blushing even. Her Poke heart raced beating like a drum and pulse throbbing like crazy. Was this...love? Was this how the other girls felt towards her as a human? Even if it wasn't, it felt good to her, but she did not want to keep the feeling within her heart, that was the only thing hurting her. She wanted to express this love as desperately as possible, and without warning, she launched herself at the Riolu and gave the Pokemon a big hug. Her eyes now two pink lovehearts and her open smile a drooling fountain, ![]() the Riolu smiled and hugged her back. "AWWWWWWWWW, WAY TOO CUTE!" Smiled Erika, as she got out her phone to take a picture, and the other girls' did likewise. "Say Misty." whispered Anabel in Misty's ear. "You don't think this is a little disturbing considering who that Riolu once was?" "Naaah, that Gary had it coming." replied Misty. "I mean those cheerleaders he always had? Obvious womanizer. So they're mad at him for being horny? God, there's no pleasing some people. Still, good thing we found a way to make Attract work for same sex Pokemon." "I'd say." said Anabel. From that day on, Erika's dream grew as more men her and her members were turned into Pokemon and more women joined the growing organization. As to those that opposed, such as Clair, they met the same fate as the men, turning into Pokemon as Clair make a surprisingly cute Dratini. The next step was eliminating the evil organizations such as Team Rocket, Team Magma, Team Aqua, and Team Galactic. And this global conspiracy against the male gender ISN'T evil? Guys like Giovanni were turning into "cuties" like Jigglypuff and Pichu. Male henchmen met the same fate, while female members were given the chance to join them or their fello male co-workers. Most joined Team Cleansing while some like Jessie kicked up a fuss. Ah Jessie, she made a cute Happiny. As for Team Plasma, the less said about them the better, such a tragic turn of events for another once proud evil organization. Mawile meanwhile could care less about what was happening. She was too happy in her new life as a Pokemon with her trainers Misty and Anabel, whom would have bi-weekly ownership of her. Two weeks with Misty and her sister and Riolu, two with Anabel and her lover Greta, and Riolu by her side all the time, as well as her other friends like Brock (Chatot), Tracy (Poliwag), Richie (Snivy) and Paul (Mime Jr.), all as female and happy as she was. tl;dr As all the evil organizations fell, Team Cleansing soon took order and began their ultimate goal. Men and boys were captured by force in mass groups, soon made worse when the organization took control of the police and the Officer Jennys. Everyday, the male population decreased while the cute Pokemon one skyrocketed. Some men took to hiding, living underground to avoid capture, but the enemy was too great, and soon they met the same fate as everyone else. No one escapes from the Internationale. Years passed, and men were no more. A dream became a reality. The End I can only imagine how laprasking could possibly top the stupidity in this fic, but I guess we'll find out later, won't we? -------------------- "If you want a vision of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a human face - forever."
-George Orwell "i aint gay i just want to fap to girl with giant boobs and cock fucking another girl. strapon is a decent substitute but i prefer the moneyshot to be one girl jizzing into the face of the other." -Abraham Lincoln |
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![]() BOOP! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 402 Joined: 2-March 11 From: Smalbany Member No.: 447 Gender: Female |
Apr 15 2011, 03:40 PM
That was stupid as hell, but not as bad as that Misty turning into Psyduck one-shot.
Although I did think for a minute that the Riolu was going to rape Mawile or something like that. -------------------- |
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![]() It's mocking time! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,413 Joined: 1-March 11 Member No.: 446 Gender: Male |
Apr 15 2011, 04:53 PM
Well have to admit that I did enjoy one of his fanfic...but think I could try to do my first mock on the story titled A Ducky Future?
-------------------- ![]() The anime adaptation of that Naruto fanfiction where Tobi comes up a a surefire plan to get the reminding tailed beast aka sexy no jutsu. (The scene you see above is Tobi showing Deidara (Who don't approve of the plan.) that the sexy no jutsu can work with the mask on.) Forums Quotes QUOTE (Screaming_Soulcatcher @ Mar 13 2011, 08:06 PM) I figure a sex scene in DBZ would take twelve episodes and a planet blowing up to complete |
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Apr 15 2011, 05:06 PM
After reading this, I have this to say:
-------------------- QUOTE (Josey the Dark Purveyor of Funk) Woah, baby! Time to get the funk out! |
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![]() Also known as FDR ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,338 Joined: 12-February 10 From: Some place you've probably never been to Member No.: 329 Gender: Male |
Apr 15 2011, 08:11 PMQUOTE (Moose @ Apr 15 2011, 03:40 PM) I don't think there was a single person who didn't think that? QUOTE (Kirby2000 @ Apr 15 2011, 04:53 PM) Go right ahead, although I wouldn't recommended it. Well, I may as well do another while I'm posting. This next one is called "Dawn of a New Gender". More self-explanatory titles, and more bad puns. Yippee. Dawn of a new Gender It was the day after the Sinnoh league had finished. In a nearby Pokemon Centre, Ask Ketchum was frustrated with himself. No matter how hard he squeezed, he just couldn't get the last bit of toothpaste out of the tube. Get your mind out of the gutter, that's not what I meant. He came so close this time in winning a Pokemon League, one more battle and he would of won and achieved his dream of becoming a Pokemon Master. However, Paul was just too powerful of a trainer. Despite disagreeing with the way he trained his Pokemon, Paul managed to train the best team out of all who competed in the League. Was Paul right about his way of training? Hey, being an asshole gets you places. All these years, Ash had only ever managed to win at the Orange League and the Battle Frontier, both really tough challenges, but not comparable to the Pokemon League. Months of traveling, gaining badges and training and it did not pay off in the end for the 3rd time. Ash could go off to the next region and try the next league, but what if he lost that one too? Confused and frustrated, Ash did not know what to do. You could always kill yourself, just to mix things up. A knock on the door of the room Ash was staying in followed. It was Dawn, who had planned on traveling to Hoenn after the Sinnoh League to compete in their Contests. Dawn had won the Sinnoh Grand Festival just before the League. Was she better then Ash at this in her rookie year? Contests =/= Pokemon Battles, dumbass. Brock meanwhile had to return to his parent's house to look after the place while his parents went away on a cruise (Which oddishly, ODDISHLY IS NOT A WORD YOU FUCKING IDIOT. was the same reason Misty had to leave...). "Hey Ash." said Dawn as she entered the room, closing the door behind her. "Hey Dawn." Ash replied. "So, have you thought about what you ll be doing next?" "I don't know what I should do Dawn. I lost 3 Pokemon Leagues in a row. No matter how hard I train and gain badges, I can't seem to get that big victory I ve dreamed about my whole life. Am I doing something wrong Dawn?" ur doin it wrong "I dunno. You have to admit, the Leagues do attract the best trainers from around the world. Each time, you re up against the very best in the world." "I know, but losing to that jerk hasn't helped! I don't agree on how he trains his Pokemon, its just wrong! But no matter how well I trained my Pokemon, he still beat me! I dunno what I can do..." Dawn secretly had a big cocky smerk on her face. ... "Well," said Dawn as she sat next to Ash on his bed. "Maybe you just need a fresh start..." "But what if I lose in the next region?" "I m not on about Pokemon, hehheh." Dawn swiftly swung her arm towards Ash's neck and injected him with something from a needle held in her hand. Ash pulled Dawn back. "What in the world are you doing?" yelled Ash, placing his hand on his neck. It's called murder, Ash. You'll learn about it soo- Oh, wait. "Giving you another path in you life!" winked Dawn. It was then, Ash began to feel weird. He could feel mass pain all throughout his body, as if it was changing. He stood up and pulled his arm away from his neck and noticed his hand and arm becoming smaller, which his fingernails were slightly lengthening. Lifting his other arm, he noticed the same change going on his other arm. He felt his legs were also becoming thinner, while he felt the outside of his body change shape, like into an hourglass figure. His hair was growing longer, to the point where he could feel it slightly on his lower back. Little did he know that his hair was changing colour as it were, to a bright blond colour. How he doesn't know, I have no idea. He's still probably too busy masturbating to notice, and his audience is probably too busy masturbating to care. Ash then began feeling extreme pain between his legs, as his "things" were altering into something completely different. Then the finally part of the change occurred, 2 large bumps were growing on his chest. Ash screamed in pain as the transformation finished, causing him to collapse onto the bed, as the transformation wore out his body to the point where he could not move. "What," punted Ash. "Did you punt do to me?" ...Punt? "Tuttuttut, ![]() now's not the time to chitchat, let's get you out of those silly boy clothes, not that you need em anyone." giggled Dawn. Dawn got on top of Ash, sitting on his torso. She got hold of his shirt and began pulling it off of Ash. Those 2 "limps"jiggled out as the shirt was remove. The fuck is a limp? "Chachin! We have us some breasts!" said Dawn, pleased with how nice Ash's breasts turned out. "What? But I m a boy! How could I have..." "Not anymore you not! Want more proof?" Dawn slid down to her next target, Ash's jeans. She didnt even have to undo the belt as Ash was now a few sizes smaller. The jeans slid off easily, revealing Ash's new slim and feminine legs. All that remained on Ash was his boxer shorts. "Ready for the next part?" said Dawn "No..." Dawn took off the boxer shorts anyway and Ash was completely naked. Dawn stepped back to admire her "work". "So if you re a boy, why do I see a vagina?" teased Dawn. Because LSD is one hell of a drug? "Why are you doing this?" "Why?" said Dawn as she began undressing herself. What. "I ve had a thing for you for awhile now and been meaning to tell you how I feel for you. But you wanna know why I never told you any of this? It's because you re always going on about training, gaining badges and catching Pokemon! I never found a moment to tell you how I feel and you re absolutely clueless about my love for you! God knows how those other 2 girls must of felt!" They apparently decided to start a global male genocide. After slipping out of her Piplup panties, ![]() This image is so useful. Dawn was completely naked as was Ash. "So, if you can't understand a girl's feelings, why don't you feel it for yourself?" Dawn jumped onto the bed and on top of Ash. She crawled up so she could see eye to eye with Ash. Both "girl's" breasts was pressed down on each other while Dawn's hands locked onto Ash's hands. "And truth be told." Dawn whispered. "I actually prefer girls to boys if ya know what I mean, so it works out perfectly for me. Cool story, bro. Dawn kissed Ash on the lips. They wet yet soft lips intertwined with each other. Soon, Dawn began using her tongue, while Ash had no choice but to let Dawn do these things as she was still too weak from the transformation to move. Once Dawn had finished kissing, she kissed her on the neck, then her collar bone and then her attention turned to Ash's breasts. She used her tongue to lick and tease Ash's nipple while her hand was cupped to Ash's other breast, teasing that nipple with one of her fingers. As Dawn began sucking the nipple, Ash moaned softly. Shortly, Dawn's hand moved down to Ash's newly formed vagina and began stroking it with her finger, causing Ash to more from the pleasure, I mored once, but not really from pleasure. It was actually kind of weird. making her wet. "You like that don't you?" said Dawn. "Bet your body can't wait for it's first orgasm." "O-orgasm?" wondered Ash. You gotta love how every woman in a laprasking fic is a slut. Dawn's attention turned away from Ash's breasts as she began moving down to Ash's vagina. Her head moved down so her tongue was in contact with it, and once it was, she began licking. Ash began panting more as the linking was making her hotter and feel really good. It was also a small shock to her former male body, experiencing these new feelings within her. "Oh, oh my god...!" panted Ash. Dawn then began moving her tongue faster. "AHHH, It feels...so good!" as Ash's moans turned into cries of joy. Soon, Dawn's tounge began licking Ash's cunt, and then sucking it. With whatever strength her body had left from the transformation, Ash's back ached and her mouth was wide open. She never knew girls had it this good, was this feeling really possible? laprasking was then awakened from his dream by Fred Phelps, who was calling him a fag. "AHHHHHH, I'M, I'M GONNA...AHHHHH" Yelled Ash, as she let out her first orgasm. Her juices were all over Dawn's face which were shortly licked off. "Enjoyed that?" asked Dawn Ash was still trying to catch her breath. "Your turn!" smiled Dawn. "What, pant, do you..." Ash was about to finish her sentence when Dawn sat on Ash's face, with her pussy in Ash's mouth. You ask her a question, and she puts a needle in you and sticks her vagina in your face. What a person. "Go on, let's see that female tongue of yours in action!" With that said, Ash returned the favor and began licking. Dawn had made her feel so good, now Ash wanted to do the same for Dawn. "Hey, you re not half bad" said Dawn as she left out a soft moan. Shortly, Dawn cupped one of her breasts and began rubbing her nipple. "Oooh yeah, right there!" Panted Dawn once Ash had licked a certain spot. Ash then began licking faster with every pant and moan Dawn cried out. Dawn massaged her breasts with both hands, stopping every now and then to move one of her breasts closer to her mouth to lick a nipple. "OH GOOOOD, YOU RE REALLY A GREAT BEGINNER AT THIS!" ![]() This is the face of a man who doesn't have time for your bullshit. Dawn placed her hand on Ash's head to push her further into her pussy. While doing this, Ash's licking increased faster. "OOOOOH YES, I M GONNA CUM! I'M, AHHHHHHH!" Dawn came into Ash's mouth. Once her orgasm had finish, Ash was licking the remains of her juices. Once finished, Dawn laid on top of Ash, with her face positioned at Ash's pussy. "You,...still want more?" asked Ash, who was already sticky from all the juices and sweat as was Dawn. "Hell yeah, we ve got a whole night of "activities" to get through!" They then proceeded to blow up a government building. And so, that was how the rest of the night panned out. The girls licking each other and rubbing their pussies together in different ways and positions. Dawn must of licked Ash in every area of her body and by the end of the night, she knew exactly where Ash was most sensitive and what parts of her body just loved to be licked, possibly more then Ash did! Very likely, more than any human being should. Eventually, the girls, exalted, tired, very hot and sticky from all the juices and sweat, laid down on the bed in each others arms. Dawn gave Ash a long kiss on her lips before finally falling asleep. Ash awoke the following morning, wondering if what happened that night was just a dream or not. Looking down at her chest, that was not the case. She would now finally move about and so climbed out of the very sticky bed. She made her way over to a mirror to get a good look at her body. As the sun rise's rays shun on her beautiful naked body and make her golden hair shine, Ash was a little confused as to what would happen now. "Oh Dawn, what's going to happen how?" she wondered. I just don't care anymore. Speaking of Dawn, she was missing, as were Ash's boy clothes. She had no clothes to wear so she could not leave the room. She then relised she was still sticky from last night. "Might as well have a shower..." Ash headed to the bathroom and entered the shower cubicle. After switching the water on, Ash began cleaning herself. While doing so, she was thinking about last night's "activities" and in particular, Dawn. Ash's nipples hardened thinking about Dawn's naked body, and soon she was cupping her breasts and rubbing her nipples. She then began rubbing her pussy while thinking of Dawn's picture perfect breasts and that amazing pussy of hers. Ash stopped for a few seconds, looking at the juices on her fingers. "Is this the way girls...ma-ma-masterbatie?" she wondered. Ash knows what masturbation is? Ash continued by inserting two fingers into her and started inserting them in and out while questioning to herself if Dawn did such things like this. The more she wanted Dawn, the more hot and hornier she became. While this was going on, Ash was unaware of the person opening the bathroom door and entering. "Ahhh, ahhh, ahhh." panted Ash. At this point, she wanted Dawn so badly. She wanted her to lick her pussy with that lovely tongue of hers and make she come again and again just like last night. "Dawn Chan, Dawn chan, Dawn Chan!" she yelled. ![]() Just before she orgasmed, two hands cupped her breasts. "AHHHHHHHHHH!" Ash orgasmed. "My, hardly thirty mintues gone, and I come back to see you masturbating." said a familiar voice. "boy, you are a health, horny girl." "Dawn!" said a Surprised Ash. Dawn was in the shower with Ash, naked as she was. "Been thinking of me?" she teased. "Dawn...I..." "Think I prefer Dawn Chan more. For those of us who actually have brains, it's stupid. As for you, I think we d best start calling you Ashley Chan from now on. Ash is such a boyish name." "Ashley Chan?" "We d better clean that pussy of yours!" Dawn grabbed the dedatchable shower head and pressed it onto Ashley's pussy with the water still spraying. The warm water shot up Ashley's pussy while Dawn was rubbing one of Ashley's nipples. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH." Yelled Ashley as she came again. "Dang, that didn't take you long to come again!" said Dawn as she put the shower head back. "You enjoyed that didn't you?" "I..." "You really like me don't you?" Ashley couldn't hide it any longer, she knew exactly how Dawn felt when she was a boy. Looking at Dawn's wet naked body, she wanted her. "YES, I love you Dawn! I want you so badly!" "That's all I needed to hear." replied Dawn. Dawn french kissed Ashley. They hugged as their tongues intertwined with each other. To Ashley, the kiss felt like it lasted forever. Eventually, they stopped. There IS a God! "Now, let's get cleaned up shall we?" said Dawn. After Dawn helped Ashley washed her hair with rose scented shampoo, both girls got out of the shower. Dawn teased Ashley by giving her a spank on the ass, which made Ashley blush. SEXUAL HARASSMENT: It's not just for men anymore! After drying each other, both girls returned to the bedroom where a bag laid on the bed. "Whats this?" ashed Ashley. "Ah that? I went clothes shopping for you." replied Dawn as she dressed back in her clothes. "But shouldn't I return as a boy now?" "Ah, well you see, there's no formula to turn girls into boys or reversing the boy to girl formula. Apparently, there's no market for that." Way to go, science. "So I m stuck like this?" "Yeah, but you re enjoying the delights, so it's not a big thing." "But what about my friends, my mom, how do I break this to them?" "Oh I rung them. I told them you were on a soul searching journey and you ll be back in a few months." Ironically, it's during this time that Ash's mom starts watching Bill O'Reilly. "And my Pokemon?" "Sent em to Oak." "Even Pikachu?" "Yup. Since no one knows you were Ash, you can spend a few months as a new "girl"!" "I guess..." "Well, lets get these new clothes on you!" "But wouldn't you need to know my measurements or something?" "Did that while you were sleeping." Not creepy at all. "Oh." Ashley made her way to the mirror. She put on the pink Pikachu panties Dawn brought her, while Dawn taught Ashley how to put on a bra. It felt weird wearing girl's underwear after all those years wearing boy's underwear, especially now she no longer had her manhood in her panties. "Right, first off, I brought you a dress in case you d like to enter a contest sometime." said Dawn as she pulled out an orange dress out of the bag. She helped Ashley put the dress on. Once on, Dawn put a large pink ribbon on Ashley. "The store clerk threw in this ribbon for free. Looks good on you." Ashley had to admit, she looked kinda cute in the dress and ribbon, although it did remind her of her time at the Celedon Gym. AKA That dark time which can never be discussed again, or else. "I brought a swimsuit too, but you can try that out later. The boat to Hoenn leaves soon, so we d better get you in your casual wear." After undressing out the dress, Ashley put on her new casual clothes, which were exactly the same as Dawn's trainer clothes, pink skirt and all! I love mental illness. "Dawn, do I have to wear this short skirt?" moaned Ashley. "Sure you do! I got rid of your boy clothes and you re not getting your contest dress dirty! Unless you want to go out in your swim wear..." teased Dawn. "I guess I have no choice..." "Right, lets get going then. A whole new region awaited us!" Dawn held Ashley's hand as they left the room, which made Ashley blush. She was now glad she had become a girl because now, she had a special person in her life which she would never had noticed in her Pokemon obsessed boy form. Pokemon > Love, anyways. What adventures awaited the two lovers as they set sail for Hoenn? And what further experiences will Ashley feel on the way? The answers were waiting for them in Hoenn... "Dawn! What about the bed in our room? We forgot to clean it!" "Meh, not our problem anymore..." Much like this Fan Fic i no longer my problem. We shall never speak of this again. Or else. -------------------- "If you want a vision of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a human face - forever."
-George Orwell "i aint gay i just want to fap to girl with giant boobs and cock fucking another girl. strapon is a decent substitute but i prefer the moneyshot to be one girl jizzing into the face of the other." -Abraham Lincoln |
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![]() The SPARTAN-IV of A.F.T.E.R. (LV21) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 407 Joined: 21-September 10 From: Chicago Sector, 2557 Member No.: 388 Gender: Male |
Apr 15 2011, 08:58 PM
Looking to take care of "Clear as Krystal", to fulfill my personal "1st Mature Fanfic Mock" milestone...with your permission of course.
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Ghostkaiba297: The Furry's Revenge (Team Mock with SM2142) guard of the twilight: Chosen one of the legendary (Team Mock with SM2142, 48/111 done) laprasking: As Clear As Krystal Genesis of the PokeGirls Bride of Mewtwo Majinonifox1: All That is Forbidden shadowlugia249: Fit for a God Latexed Lugia Slime and Punishment Fur for All Occasions ![]() "I'm still trying to figure out how this is sexy. On the bright side, this does have a practical use. Okay, look at it. If you can see yourself jerking off to it, kill yourself." - Nihilistic One, on outright terrible furry-fetish art |
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![]() The SPARTAN-IV of A.F.T.E.R. (LV21) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 407 Joined: 21-September 10 From: Chicago Sector, 2557 Member No.: 388 Gender: Male |
Apr 15 2011, 11:18 PM
Wait, what the fuck am I doing asking your permission for? I'm just gonna get this over with before someone else sacrifices their innocent life over this.
As Clear As Krystal By Laprasking, the King of Sick Fucks It had been another long day for Princess Peach. Among her meetings with other world leaders, opening landmarks by cutting a silly red ribbon, meeting with her people and other Princess duties, she hardly got time for herself, and when she did, Bowser would again kidnap her. I told her to rip that damn “Kidnap Me” sign off her back, but nooooooo… She had made it to the castle bedroom where she could take a nap for about an hour or two before her next engagement. You’d think that for all the times Mario has saved her royal ass, she would quit cheating on him. Or at least she would have had it not been for the package that laid on her bed. "Hmm?" she wondered. She looked at the box, no label. Looks like the Mushroom Kingdom has taken after the N64’s standard of not putting end labels on things. "Huh, must be another present from my people." Now anyone of big importance would get someone to suspect an mysterious package, but considering Peach had been kidnapped so many times and fallen for Bowser's traps, she never learned. Throwing cation to the wind (wait, we’re throwing positive ions at things now?), she opened the box and was presented by a blue latex suit. "Oh my, this looks cute." gazing upon the hood. She took the suit out of the box to look at the rest of it. It resembled a fox with a human body. Peach remembered that the Mario Brothers liked playing the Starfox games on their Nintendo system and that this was based on one of the characters, Krystal. Which means that Mario and Luigi are furries in disguise. Who knew? "Say, I bet Mario would like to see me wear this." Deep down, Peach always had a playful side to herself. As a child, she'd go places she wasn't allowed to go and such. Dumb bitch. She was curious as to what the suit would feel like, and nothing was going to stop her. She had plenty of time, so why not? After undressing out of her infamous dress, gloves, shoes and bra and panties, she was completely naked apart from one item, her crown. She had to keep this item on at all times, part from showers and sleep. Otherwise, during that time she had it off, she would be completely powerless. What, does that supposedly radioactive crown imbue her with superpowers or something? All control over the Mushroom Kingdom, all commands of her loyal subjects, everything would be gone until she put the crown back on, for this was the tradition and code of the Mushroom Kingdom Royal Family. Peach was brought up on this rule, but she really did not realize the true seriousness of it. Oh. Never mind, then. "Ah, it will only be for an hour!" Which is destined to be the worst hour of EVERYONE’S lives. The Princess took her crown off and placed it ontop of her clothes that laid on the bed. No longer was she a Princess, but just Peach, a normal woman with no royal control or power. Anyone could do whatever they want with her and get away with it, at least until Mario goomba-stomps their heads in, but so few knew the code and she was, to her knowledge, alone in the room. The suit had a zipper on the back to get into the suit, so she unzipped it and placed her legs inside the leg slots. I swear, there are man-eating latex suits and creatures everywhere I look, why is that? As they slid in, they made a rubbery sound and the coolness felt so good on her legs. She then proceeded to putting the suit up so her legs were fully slotted in, and the suit was around her torso and ass. The suit had really had her ass stand out, which was normally hidden most of the time inside her pink dress. *insert overused DAT ASS “joke” here* The huge tail stood up on its own, she assumed it was a material inside the tail. Next came the arms, which were a struggle, but with enough wiggles and moving about, she managed to get them in. She could not reach the zipper, but it didnt matter to her as she would be in and out in short time. Moving her hands about, she managed to get her breasts to slot in properly. Strangely, there were see through bits for her nipples to be exposed and visible, placed there for no logical reason whatsoever. The final piece to put on was the attached hood. Using her hands, now paws, she pulled the hood ontop of her head. Once it was fitted on properly, she was done getting in touch with her inner furry. Some of her hair didnt go inside the hood, but it would be difficult to do by herself anyway. The eye holes were big enough to see out of and the snout allowed her breathing, so she was set to go. She looked into her huge mirror to look and her now shiny, rubber body. Apart from the dangling hair, you would not recognize it was Peach. She started posing in sexy positions, laying on the bed, being down on all fours, begging like a dog, anything she could think of that looked sexy. Knock it off, OOC Peach, or I’ll knock your block off. An hour had passed, and Peach was about to take the suit off. Just before she could however, the suit began to tighten all over her body. She stood in front of the mirror as she struggled to move. She watched as her hair mysteriously started to move up, into the hood before it was completely inside! Now, she was unrecognizable. In between her legs, her pussy was now visible, no longer hidden inside the suit. Now seriously, how does that work? DOES NOT COMPUTE! Peach managed to turn around and to her horror, and the horror of the reader, the zip was zipping itself up all by itself! Once zipped, it completely vanished, leaving nothing but suit! As she tried to move her ass in panic, shoe noticed her tail was moving as well, like it was now a part of her body! Just what kind of suit was it anyway? Assuming this was bought from that creepy, slowly-respawning old man in that run-down Minnesota costume shop, I’d say it was a demonic hellspawn that was not of this earth. Continuing the struggle, she eventually fell onto the bed on all fours with her ass in the air unable to move at all. She tried to scream out, but her speech had now been replaced with howls. "Howl? Hooowl? Hoooooooooooowl!" she panicked. “HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWL!!!” Spartan-S08 said in mock fright, just to be annoying. She heard the door open. Oh god she thought, this is so embarrassing. "Nice ass, the suit really suits you. By the way, HI I'M DAISY!" said a familiar voice. It was Peach's best friend, Princess Daisy. She sat next to Peach on the bed. "Oh yeah, you fell for the suit hook, line and sinker." she said rubbing her hand across Peach's back, making rubber sounds. Daisy then stood up and began undressing. "You know something? I'm tired of you being the ruler of the Kingdom, I should be ruler, no, Queen! I would have been next in line had it not been for you! I was only friends with you so I couStill, that's about to change." Hello, mega grammar fail! Soon enough, Daisy was naked, apart from a strap-on dildo. She placed herself on the bed on her knees behind Peach. GAAAAAA- ![]() "Right, all it takes is an orgasm and the suit will finish the job!" Slowly, Daisy inserted the tip of the dildo into Peach's pussy. The sheer size of it sent shock waves throughout Peach's body. Being a Princess, Peach was not allowed to engage in any sexual activity with anyone, let alone another female! She could only have sex with a married partner, and even that was very limited to what she could do. A Princess cannot be caught doing such thing. Of course, without the crown on, Daisy could treat Peach anyway she pleased. Her bitch, her personal sex pet, a common whore! Now this fic is REALLY starting to piss me off…but for entirely different reasons than its suckiness! With the dildo inside Peach, Daisy began thrusting back and forth slowing at first, but then speeding up. Peach could only moan and howl like a dog, but the sensations made her hot and sweat inside the suit. She could feel the trusts throughout her body, and see her nipples erect against her will. She was far from enjoying the sex, but it felt so good. She had tried to hold back on the incoming orgasm in fear of what may happen, but it was no use, as she came like a bitch in heat. "HOOOOOOOOOOOWL!" She came. “ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!” The Spartan-II’s head asploded again. Peach collapsed on the bed having finally some control over her body. Not for long as she lost control again once laid on the bed. "Should take a few mins for the final transformation to take effect." said Daisy as she got off the bed and slipped out of the strap on. She made her way not to her pile of clothes, but Peach's. She got her handbag and took out some pills, and a can of hair spray. ![]() "Just enough time to see my "transformation"!". Daisy took one pill and put it in her mouth. Her body began to change. Her skin became lighter, the same tone as Peach's. She took another and her body began to change again. This time, her figure altered as her boobs and ass became bigger, and her arms became smaller, to the same scale as Peach. Dr. Hax then burst through the door, and with a resounding “HAAAAAAX!!!” pelted Daisy to death with bundle upon bundle of CRT monitors. The End…NOT! "I must say, you always had a great figure." she giggled. Daisy then took the hair spray and sprayed it all other her hair. Her dark short brown color was slowly changing into a familiar long blonde color, and I think you can guess to who's hair. Durr, who could that be!? /sarcasm She took one last pill. "Hi, I'm Princess Peach." said Daisy, who now sounded and looked exactly like Peach! She then proceeded to dress herself in Peach's clothes, a perfect fit from underwear to dress! Heavy Weapons Guy: PEACH IS NOT OUR PEACH…SPY!!! "Nice crown, don't mind if I do!" Peach squealed as Daisy put the royal crown. Not only had she stole her identity, she had now total control over the mushroom kingdom. "What'cha think? With you out of the picture, I can now take my rightful place as ruler of this land! Okay, I have to change my identity, but its a willing sacrifice for a perfect plan! The changes are permanent, as long as I keep taking the pills and use the hair spray for a couple of months." You just contradicted your “permanent” statement, you dumb broad! Peach began to cry, she could not believe her best friend could be so mean to her. She had stolen everything from her, and now Peach was helpless and terrified of what would happen to her. "Should be time now." Daisy looked at her watch. "3, 2, 1..." *singing* Countdown to insanity! Goodbye reality! Suddenly, Peach began to feel really strange. The suit tightened and she could feel something moving into her real ears and into her head, like her brain was now trapped in a suit of its own! Her eyes became blank as memories and royal teachings started to disappear from her mind, and and new information was written in its place. Her royal duties and thoughts were now being replaced with sexual desires and obedience. Now, she was programed to obey her mistress "Peach", and her body program to become obsessed with sex. This fanfic is continuing to mash my berserk button relentlessly. If this keeps up, I’m gonna strangle every last goddamn fanfiction author in the world, good or bad! She now could think of nothing but mating, she now had many turn on's that she could orgasm to, many things that would of never cross her previously innocent mind. As this was happening, her nipples and clit erected and her pussy was already as hot as a bitch in heat, and soaked in pussy juices. Once her mind was overflowing with images of sexual desire, she cupped her hand onto one breast and her other hand on her pussy and began to masturbate. She was sweating inside the suit, and her mouth was wide open and drooling as she fantasized at the thought of getting fucked. She wanted dick to fuck her pussy as hard, as big and as fast as possible. Her transformation was almost complete, all it needs was some words from Daisy and another orgasm. Daisy walked over to her and pronounced; Words fail me...this fic is the absolute WORST I have reviewed so far! "You are nothing more then my pet. You are and were nothing before you became my pet. Your purpose is nothing more then to fuck and have sex with anything and anyone, whether it be man, woman or beast. Sex is your life and passion, and you obey me and anyone I say you obey. You worship me and anyone I say you worship. You have sexual fantasies of me and anyone I say you do. You will eat, sleep and fuck how and who I, and anyone I say so, say so. From this day forth, you are not a human. You do not know what you are, but do not question yourself or your purpose. Your name from now on shall be Krystal, Krystal the Royal Fucking Pet. Your daily routine will involving being by my side and endless fucking. When you go to sleep at night and awake in the morning, this routine shall be repeated. When I click my fingers, you will orgasm and the rest of your life shall be set." Daisy clicked her fingers and Peach came. That orgasm had changed her forever. She was no longer Princess Peach of the Mushroom Kingdom, she was now transformed into Krystal, the Royal Fucking Pet. Spartan-S08 walked up behind Daisy and muttered in a low tone; “For reminding me of a fatal roleplaying moment from my Second Life escapades, you have earned one free chainsaw bayonet up the ass, effective immediately. And as for you, Peach, I can only administer a mercy-killing. Sorry.” You can probably guess what happens next… The End? No, not really. But I wish it were! Just then the door knocked. "Princess Peach, we're ready for your public address." said a voice. "Be right there!" replied Daisy. She looked over to Krystal. "Come my pet, let's get you cleaned up and you can come with me to my royal address." Krystal petted as she made her way to her mistress. Daisy, now Princess Peach, stood on a balcony where "her" people below were cheering as she made her appearance. The people absolutely adored their princess, but little did they know that the real former Princess Peach was not in view, rather sat beside Daisy in that blue suit, fingering herself thinking about sex with anyone. Gee, I wonder if we can degrade the women of the Mushroom Kingdom any more than what we can do now! /sarcasm "People of the Mushroom Kingdom!" said "Peach". "I have some terrific news! We can no longer fear an attack or kidnapping from the evil King Bowser as he has agreed to no longer do so!" "HOORAAAAAAAY!" the crowd applauded. "The bad news is, he now owns 50% of the land..." Minus the fact that there is now a sex-crazed furry in our midst, and Daisy’s betrayal, this could have been the plot for another Mario game. But instead, we get this crap... The clapping and the readers then started to slow and become dead as the huge dark shadows of Bowser's Airships floated above the crowd and ropes descended as Koopa Troopers came down to meet the crowd. Shortly then, the mighty King Bowser came down in his Clown Ship thing. He roared at the crowd as they ran for their lives more terrified as ever. How could the Princess they love so much agree to such a thing? One week later, at an unknown secret destination, Princess Peach and her Pet Krystal were waiting as King Bowser and his men came to greet them. Why is “Pet” capitalized, is the author trying to make her as some sort of (un)holy figure? "Well well, don't you look the part!" said Bowser. "I almost mistook you for the real..." "Ssssh." said Peach. "You never know who could be watching." “Your mom.” "Don't worry, my minions have swift guard of the area." "Well anyway, yes. No one suspects a thing, despite the hand over of the land." "Excellent, I told you this plan would work." "Yes well, I still have a few questions." "Go on." Great, now we can’t even tell who’s talking. Great job, laprasking… "Krystal scratched her "ear" with her leg, like a real pet. I had a feel of it and it felt real. When I felt it before she put it on, I felt nothing inside. Not to mention her tail moves along on its own from time to time. Explain." "Ah well. Well basically, the cheap-ass fursuit eventually becomes her skin, literally. Her old skin vanishes and things like those ears and the tail become working body parts, along with other things like the growing of claws, so you'll need to trim her face off from time to time." "I see, so no going back then?" "Nope, she's stuck like that forever." "Not that it matters since I'm stuck like this for the rest of my life." "True." "So, we're still on for your side of the (Deal or No) deal?" "Right. You become Queen in a month, and in exchange, I get 50% of the Kingdom and bi-weekly ownership of "Krystal"." "Yes, one week with me, the next week with you, then me again and so on." Peach keeled over next to Krystal. Huh…well, a bullet saved means I can focus my sniping attention on the author after this is done. "Krystal, this is King Bowser. When you are with him, you do as he says, understand?" Krystal nodded as she looked at Bowser, drooling at the thought of how "huge" he must be downstairs. She walked over to him. "Boy, I'm gonna have fun with you!" Bowser and Krystal then began to leave to go back to Bowser's castle. "Have fun you two! See you next week Krystal!" At least now, Krystal no longer had to worry about royal appointments anymore. She could now "play" to her heart's content... The End Seriously, what the FUCK was the author on when he wrote this shit!? This fic almost destroyed me, due to it keeping my Berserk Button in a pressed state throughout. Next time, I’m sticking to the lesser fics so this doesn’t happen again. In the meantime, I have this to say to the author.
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Apr 16 2011, 01:23 AMQUOTE (YTB @ Apr 15 2011, 11:11 PM) Well then lets get this party started. As you see my mock will be in pink. Misty sat at her desk depressed, gazing at a photo of her and her Psyduck. It had been one month after that event that changed everyone, one month since she released her Pokemon into the wild. "Oh Psyduck." sighed Misty. "Why did I ever let you go?" I feel a flashback coming on. A month ago, she was in the Viridian Forest after she heard of a new hotspot for Water Pokemon, a lake that recently became home to a ton of Water Pokemon, so she decided to check it out, despite the Bug Pokemon that roamed within the forest. When she got there, she saw a large group of Psyduck that lived there. She had no intention of owning another Psyduck, but she figured it would be good for her own Psyduck to interaction with these Psyduck. After releasing Psyduck from it's Pokeball, the clumsy Pokemon spent the afternoon playing, poorly swimming and doing all sorted with it's kind, while Misty observed her Pokemon and it's happiness. Once evening came, it was time to go. Misty did not want to see the nocturnal bug Pokemon at night, so she wanted to leave before darkness came. However, a thought came to her during the time they were there. Psyduck had a great time while they were their, she had never seen him so happy. It reminded her of when Ash almost release Pikachu when they encountered that herd of Pikachu. Now she fully understood how he felt, and while Pikachu was still happy with Ash, what kind of future would Psyduck have staying with her? She secretly loved him really, I can't believe it, you are secretly loving more then one person and one of them is a Pokemon. but he really wasn't getting any better at battles thanks to his headaches and losing battles left right and center. At least here, he would not have to worry about being different and be happy. There was no question about it, she had to leave him here. She told him that he could be staying. Psyduck looked sad at his trainer, not wanting to leave, but Misty insisted he would be happier among the other Psyducks, and hugged him. When Psyduck tried to follow her, Misty snapped by throwing his Pokeball to the ground and stomping it, smashing the ball to pieces, telling him he had no trainer to go back to anymore. Hurt by her words and actions, Misty go teary eyed and said her fail goodbye, before running away. "I'm sorry Psyduck. I've always loved you. Goodbye..." Those words echoed in Misty's head even a month later. That was the wrong way to say goodbye and she wished she could go back to that moment and do it the right way. Oh come on, that was how someone else said goodbye to their pokemon. Daisy soon entered the room, noticing her sister looking down in the dumps. "Hey Misty." she spoke, then paused. "You still miss Psyduck don't you?" "What, that old Pokemon?" responded Misty, wiping her tears. "Nah. Glad to rid of him! He was cramping my style, and really needed to be with his own kind!" "Misty, you're a really bad lair." Misty sat up and hugged her sister. "Oh Daisy." sobbed Misty. "I can't help but miss him! I know he annoyed me so much, but we had a special bond together, and he was as valuable as any of my Pokemon." Because any Pokemon that can blast-off Team Rocket are valuable. "I know Misty, but it was like you said, you thought it was for the best for him. If you were to go back, there's a chance he won't want to leave you again." "I know! But I can't help but wonder how he's doing, and if the other Psyduck are treating him well. If only there was a way I could just see that he's doing alright." Daisy froze in thought for a moment as a light bulb lit up above her head. "...There might be a way." said Daisy. "What way?" A small period of time passed as the sisters made their way into the dark dusty Gym storage room, with boxes piled together and even a wild Zubat hanging from above. Only one light bulb lit the dim room, as Daisy looked inside a large basket of outfits looking for something. "What are you looking for Daisy?" asked Misty. "Well, and bear with me on this. What if you went in disguise to check up on Psyduck? That way, he won't know it's you and you would get to check up on him without interfering." "Well that sounds like an idea, but what kind of disguise would fool him into thinking...on second thoughts, don't answer that question." The answer is that Psyducks will fall for any disguise. "Ah, found it!" Daisy pulled out a big yellow costume from the basket. It was a complete rubber latex suit from head to toe, fashioned to look just like a human shaped Psyduck. Oh no not again. "...you're kidding right?" said Misty, not impressed with her sister's suggestion. "Oh come on, we used it years ago for a play called The Lonely Psyduck, and I happen to know it's your size. Believe me I know, I wore this years ago and was your near exact measurements, bar the slightly rounder ass and fuller breasts." "Even so, I don't really feel comfortable wearing...that." "I promise I won't tell Violet and Lily." Don't do it, Daisy is lying. "...I'll think about it." Later she went to the fanfic site and saw the story Psyduck's Revenge in which made her not want to go anymore. The End. If only that had happen. The next day, Misty arrived in the Veridian Forest. She still wasn't a hundred percent sure whether to go through with Daisy's idea or not, but she figured she would decide once she got there. Her heart raced as she walked through the quiet forest, getting closer and closer to the lake and what she could be doing. Soon enough, she was close to the lake, recognizing the part of the pathway she traveled before. The whole time walking there, her mind debated on what to do or not to do, until she reached her destination, her mind was made up. She then picked Ash over Psyduck and left the area. The End. These fake endings isn't going to do anything to stop the thing that is about to happen sadly. "Well, I guess the area is quite secluded." she whispered to herself. She hid in a bush by a tree, and began to undress, first unstrapping her suspenders, then pulling her favorite yellow top over her head before slipping out of her shorts, trainers and socks. She unhooked her bra next, unleashing her already large breasts Ok either this fanfiction take place years after Pokemon ended or Misty is becoming like May is in media. from their holding and finally pulling her underwear down her smooth legs. As she stood naked within the bush, Misty shivered from a chilly breeze that blew past her, already erecting her nipples from the sensation. She had never undressed outdoors before, not even to go swimming, so this already felt so daring to her, feeling good in a way. "Better get this over with." She opened her backpack and pulled out the Psyduck suit within. Holding it in front of her, it really did look like a human shaped Psyduck. The eyes had no holes, only fake plastic white eyes that resembled the duck's in question. Three rubber hairs on an otherwise bald head stood out like an inflated washing up glove. The beak stood out the most, while there were only three slots for fingers and toes, giving the webbed look of a Psyduck's. Finishing her gaze, Misty unzipped the back and inserted her legs into the slots. Misty never wore tights before, but imagined this was how it felt to put on a pair, only the cool latex felt so good on her legs. Her ass really stood out in the suit, as well as the cute Psyduck tail in between the top of her butt cheeks. She wiggled her ass for fun to make her tail move a bit, making Misty smile at the sensation. This time Misty love her Psyduck tail in a sexual way. She then pulled the arm slots on her arms like putting on rubber gloves that reached up to her arms, fingers and toes slotting into the three tiny slots, squeezing four fingers into two slots. After her breasts cupped inside and the suit covered most of her body, she let out her hair band to release her hair, then inserted the large Psyduck hood onto her head, moving it left and right so the eyes were level with the suits eyes, which despite the plain look, Misty could see perfectly as they worked like a two way mirror. She could breath like normal through her nose and mouth, however her jaw and upper lip had slots which attached them to the beak, so that every time she spoke, the beak would move accordingly. She was near complete, all that was left was the zip. Hard to zip up on her own, however she had a solution. Tied to the zipper was a long string to help her out. She first zipped the suit halfway up, then flung the string over her shoulder and then pulled it to zip up the remaining exposed skin. The string was near invisible so the Psyduck would most likely not notice, but Misty felt comfortable within the full suit. She looked at her now yellow shiny body, really showing off her figure, breasts and ass, as the suit was a perfect fit. Misty then took out a pocket mirror from her backpack to look at the strange looking Psyduck looking back at her. She secretly blushed at herself, feeling speechless at her transformation from beautiful redhead to yellow duck with three black hairs, plain white eyes, large beak and bright yellow skin, feeling hot from the feeling and concealed hair inside her hood. Plese let that not mean that she is turn on by this. "Psyduck, Psy Psy Psyduck!" she practiced with her beak, moving like it was attached at birth. She could not do a perfect Psyduck impression, but then again, she was a human shaped one, so it really did not matter. She hid her backpack and clothes in the bush and began the rest of her walk to the lake. Walking was not too hard in the suit, it was like a second skin feeling tight and snug at the same time. Never in her life did she feel much like a wild Pokemon then now. A short time later, Misty arrived at the lake, and was not ready for the sight she encountered. Instead of Psyducks swimming happily, she saw Golducks playing around and having fun. She hid behind a tree and observed the sight. Run now, Golducks are not to be trusted. "My goodness, have they really gotten so far in a month?" she said to herself, feeling a little insulted by the fact that her Psyduck got stronger without her. "Well, since I'm here, I best get started." She revealed herself from the tree and dived into the shining lake, which was not too large, but large enough not to be classed as a pond. It was an unusual feeling swimming in the lake without feeling wet on her whole size. Sure, she could still feel the chill of the cold water that never once bothered her, but the suit covering her whole body ensured she would not get wet anywhere unless she was sweating or being aroused inside. Foreshadowing FTW no wait this is a bad thing. Swimming in the suit felt like swimming naked to Misty and was no trouble for an expert swimmer like herself. She swam to the small rock island in the middle and climbed onto it, laying on her right side sort of posing for the Pokemon, whom had yet to notice her. You fool, why must you pose for the Psyducks, that like asking to be raped by them. "Psyduck!" she called to them, having no knowledge of the Pokemon language. "Psyduck Psy!" The Golduck turned and looked at the new face that laid on rock island. The curious Pokemon swam over to her and climbed onto the island, surrounding Misty. Observing her, Misty hoped her disguise would fool them, though being larger then them opened a curious eye to the Pokemon that starred at her. There were about seven Golduck that surround her, she looked at each of them to see if any of them were her old Psyduck, hard to tell when they all looked the same, but looking at one in particular, she had a good feeling it was her old Psyduck. Nothing gave it away, but almost like a mother's instinct, she could tell this was him. More like lover instinct. "Psy Psyduck!" she smiled, hoping it would recognize her voice. Wasn't the point of being in disguise was to not let Psyduck know that she is checking up on him. Nothing happened, the Pokemon continued to just stand there. Misty began to worry that the Golduck had saw through her disguise. "Psy?" she said, while placing her hands on her head in a Psyduck way like she had a headache, hoping to fool them. The Golduck then began to place their webbed hands on their heads. What followed after that was the red jewel on the Golduck's foreheads began to glow bright, like the Pokemon were performing a weird ritual. At that moment, Misty made the mistake of looking at the bright glow, curious as to what this meant, but now she could not take her eyes away from the sensation. "Those lights, they look very...pretty." she thought, as her mind started to ease and relax. Any worries she had now were an afterthought now as her only concern were the "pretty lights" that were effecting her mind, entrancing her into an hypnotic spell she was unaware of. Once the lights had stopped, Misty noticed another "ritual" going on down below at the groin area of the Pokemon, as their hard stiff members grew to maximum length. Look like she is about to get raped. Rather then panic, Misty found herself turned on by the erect Pokemon, panting, feeling horny down below, and even erect herself in the nipple department. Oh wait she wants it, crap. She crawled towards her old Pokemon, horny from the hypnotic spell placed on her, and turning her full attention to how large Golduck had gotten. Heart racing and mouth drooling, she wanted cock so badly for some reason, it was the only thing going around her mind, the command to obey, obey and suck. Oh crap here it comes. She opened her mouth and placed Golduck's cock into her beck and mouth, and began to play with the tip with her tongue while sucking. Being ten inches, the cock would easily reach her mouth while her her beck was intact and could even moved her head back and forth, which she proceeded with doing, starting with a slow motion, then speeding up, chasing Golduck's balls to bounce up and down. Golduck was panting from his former mistress making him feel so good, building up to the white gooey explosion about to happen in Misty's mouth. Soon enough, Golduck came in her mouth, inflating her yellow cheeks with cum and even chasing some to slide down her mouth. Misty withdrew from the still erect blue cock, as cum drooled from out of her beck. The cum that remained in her mouth however, was swallowed in an instant. To her, it tasted so good, nothing tasted this good before. It was like all her favorite foods were rolled into one, keeping all the taste that made them her favorites. Then again, did it really taste so good, or did the hypnosis tell her so? It the hyponosis because if cum was that good then everyone would having sex with a Golduck. Misty could not believe she did that, but she did not care. The yellow duck girl laid on her back on the rock island, and the Golduck surrounded her more so. Not completely satisfied with just one Golduck, she reached out to the two closest to her head, grabbed their cocks and started jerking them off her her webbed hands. Another Golduck sat just below her breasts and placed its light blue member in-between the yellow duck's breasts, which squeezing them together and thrusting up and down for a titty job. A forth then squeezed in so it could get another blowjob from Misty, inserting it's beck into the wide open beck. The other Golduck began masturbating in front of her, getting off from the whole sexual situation, as was Misty who never felt so wanted in her life. The two she was rubbing soon came all over her face, then the tit fucker followed spraying all over her neck and breasts. The observing fappers came all over her stomach, legs and arms. The final Golduck came into her mouth, filling the beck up like a glass cup that soon emptied down her throat, as Misty wanted more of the cum. Not a single bit of yellow was showing on Misty, only white sticky cum covered her whole body and suit. This is messier then the hentai I see in mangas back when I read hentai. As soon as she drank the cum in her beck, she rubbed cum onto her hand from her body and let it drip into her beck, like a child obsessed with candy. Sorry I am about to sound like Iris here but Misty you are such a kid. "S-s-s-soooooo...good." she said, before she passed out from the excitement. Hours later, she awoke on the rocky island, like she awoke from a dream. Sitting up, she saw all the Gokduck sleeping beside her, it was evening. Her suit was clean and not sticky in any way. Was that all a dream? It certainly felt dream-ish to her. "That had to be a dream." she thought. "Why would I...I mean I'd never screw around with Pokemon, right?" She had a hard time remembering what exactly she did with the Golduck. "I must of played with them, INNOSENTLY, and then got tired and took a nap...yeah, that must have been what happened! That dream was just a weird nightmare!" It is a nightmare to everyone. Trying to forget it, she found herself going through the events of the dream. Some about it was bugging her. "Still, if those Golduck were screwing with me...in a dream anyway...why did none of the have sex with me? I gave them hand and blowjobs, and they even came all over me, but not one...aww why the hell am I having these thoughts anyway?" Because Ash didn't give you what you wanted and now you want it from Golduck. Sitting up, and tiptoeing carefully not to wake the Golduck, Misty dived back into the lake, swimming back to land, unzipping and slipping out of her suit before redressing herself, and made her way home. The "dream" still fresh in her mind by the time she returned to the Gym. It was dark already and her sister were already asleep, so she made herself a midnight sneak and went straight to bed afterwards, forgetting to return the Psyduck suit to the storage room. It had been an eventful day and she was tired, not to mention she had other things on her mind, hence why she skipped her nightgown and slipped into her bed covers naked after undressing. This can't end well. A small period of time passed after she closed her eyes and the most unusual thing happened. She started hearing Golduck quacks in her mind. First it was one quacking, then two, and then several quacks getting louder and louder in her head like an annoying ringing. Rather then wake up, Misty's right hand slide down her body, making contact with her clit and her already soaking wet lady lips. Rubbing her vagina in passion, her spare hand then cupped her left breast, squeezing it hard like juicing an orange, and circling her hard nipple with her finger. A picture started to form in her mind. The group of Golduck, and her on all fours, each Pokemon taking her from behind in turns like a wild animal, trusting at rapid speed. The orgy only made Misty more horny, and now she pictured herself back in the Psyduck suit. She wanted them to fuck her so bad, not as a human, but as a Pokemon. Ok it one thing to masturbate to a Golduck as a human but another when you do it while wanting to be a Pokemon. "PSY, PSY, PSY, DUCK, DUCK, DUUUUUCK." She panted in heat, rubbing faster as the orgasm built within her. "!" It look like Misty been spotted. A massive flood of juices escaped from her never regions, creating a small puddle on her bed sheets, and becoming more wet from the sweat all over Misty's body. The quacks had stopped, Misty panted for a good ten minutes before finally falling fast asleep. The next day, Misty overslept and awoke at one pm. She noted her sticky and slightly still wet body., even her nipples were still erect. "D-Did I have some extreme wet dream or something?" she wondered, not remembering what exactly made her cum so hard, like a forgotten dream. "I better go wash up." All dreams are wet for a water trainer but when their dream have sexual stuff going on then it is extreme. She then noticed the time. "One pm?" she looked wide eyed. "Better make it a quick shower." She got up and noticed the Psyduck hood of the suit poking out of her backpack. She starred at it for a good ten minutes, like a starring contest. Ok now you know that things are getting werid when you start have a starring contest with a hood. "...I wonder what Psyduck's doing right now?" she said, as a strange erg to go back to the lake built in her. "If I leave now, I can be there at two thirty and spend a good three hours with Psyduck! Hell, I won't even need to shower if I'm swimming!" First of all is erg even a word and second don't you need soap to get clean. So with her day schedule sorted, Misty got dressed while skipping the bra in the process, grabbed her backpack and out her room and the Gym to return to the Viridian Forest. The next few days were the same for Misty, every day her erg to go back got stronger, she'd get there, dress in the Psyduck suit, hand and blow job the Golduck after another session of hypnosis from the red jewels, and then returning home to head for bed after a sneak. And yet still, the Golduck did not penetrate her once, only jerking off onto her and hand and suck service from Misty. Because they are Pokeshippers and want Ash to be her first. This would disappoint her, but at least Misty would taste more of that delicious cum. Why don't she just take some of it and put it in a bottle of milk and then market it. The longer this went on, the more horny and aroused Misty began, who was starting to lose her mind like her IQ was dropping every day, not that she cared, she was loving every moment of it. She soon becomes dumber then Ash. One evening returning to the Gym, rather then going straight to the kitchen, she found Daisy waiting for her in the living room, arms crossed. "And where have you been young sis?" asked Daisy with a hint of anger. "Oh, Daisy." replied Misty like she was in a daze, acting like a really young teenager. "I was just...just..." "Don't tell me you've been going to Viridian Forest every day to see Psyduck?" "No no, I was like...training. That it, training with my...Pokemon." "You can't even answer me properly." Even Daisy knows that Misty is getting dumber. Daisy grabbed Misty's bag and pulled out the Psyduck suit. "I knew it. You have been there." "So what if I have? Aint your business..." "I do let you get on with your own devices Misty and I respect that, but when I don't see my younger sister for a whole FOUR days, I worry! You've even neglected your Gym Leader duties, we've had to just hand out badges again." "So?" "SO? Do you want the Pokemon League to strip us of our license as an official Pokemon Gym? More to the point, you're getting too reconnected to Psyduck. You said yourself you didn't want him to leave his new home to go back to you..." "Bah, what do you know? They don't know it's me. I'm not a little kid, Iz can do what I want!" Iz must be a new teen talk for something. "Well, for now this suit is going back into storage until you get your head together! You're not acting like yourself, and its something to do with those Psyduck!" Will Daisy plan to get Misty but to normal be a succeed? Find out right now. Daisy walked away, carrying the Psyduck suit back to the storage room. "Fine! You do that then. I'm gonna go to bed now." She walked upstairs to her bed room, striped out of her clothes, carelessly tossed them on the floor, and collapsed on the bed, crawling into her bed covers. "Dumb sister." she said to herself. Around midnight, the quacks started again in Misty's mind, only this time, a voice could be heard, causing Misty to sit up. "Misty." said the deep voice. "Can you hear me?" "W-who are you?" asked a sleepy Misty. "That doesnt matter right now. Your Golduck needs you." "He does?" "Yes, in fact all the Golduck need you at the lake. Their cocks desire your wet pussy and tight ass." "But they've never fucked me before in the past." "But now they're ready too." Come on Misty I know you are smarter then this so don't fall for their tricks. "But my suit." "You'll need to fetch that. You cannot let your sisters boss you around. They don't want you to feel good." "They don't?" "No. They can never feel the level of pleasure that you feel. They're jealous." Yes because of cousre Misty sisters must also want to do Golduck for their good tasting cum. "Yes, they must be." "Go get the suit." "Right now?" "Yes, the Golduck want you so badly. You want them so badly, don't you?" "Yes!" "Go them." Who is this them that you speak of, Golduck? Without even getting dressed, Misty snuck downstairs to the storage room, to which she found was locked with a padlock. "You can't stop me Daisy." she whistered, picking up a Pokeball from her backpack that was left in the living room. Opening the Pokeball, Staryu can out. "Okay Staryu, use Rapid Spin quietly on the padlock!" Staryu did as instructed, spinning in the air like a ninja star and breaking the padlock in one swoop. "Perfect Staryu, return." You know I have a bad feeling that this is going to be the last time she will be ever using her Pokemon. After returning her Pokemon to its ball, Misty walked into the storage room, and swiped the Psyduck suit from the basket. She left the Gym with a feeling she may never return, but if she was walking outside in the buff at night, then she had no care in the world other then to pleasure and be pleasured by the Golduck. She then got raped and killed by a random person. The End...find we will continue this story but don't say I didn't warn you. As soon as she arrived in the forest, she hopped one leg into the suit, then another, like she was in a hurry. Arms slid in a quick fashion, pulling the rest of suit onto her body and moving about so her body was in the correct parts of the suit. Just before she arrived at the lake, the hood was forced down onto her head, completing her transformation, expect in the hurry, she forgot to zip herself up. Arriving at the lake, she saw the Golduck standing on the rocky island ready in wait for Misty, and members growing instantly at her arrival. Tonight was special for all parties involved, to the Golduck, Misty looked more beautiful then ever, yellow body shining in the moonlight as Misty rubbed her body in a sexual manner. Not to waste anymore time, she jumped and dived in quickly into the lake and swam as fast as she could to her new favorite place in the world. She climbed up on the island as the Golduck made space for her arrival. She looked at their throbbing cocks, getting off from their desires. Nipples hard as the could be, pussy as wet as anything, she positioned herself on all fours, wiggling her ass to signal what she desired the most. The thing that she desired the most was a cake with Golduck cum as the frosting. "Psyduck?" she asked. A Golduck walked behind her, a particular Golduck in fact, hers. He placed both hands on her buttocks, squeezing them and rubbing them to taste Misty. Golduck began to insert his cock into Misty's vaginal, starting as he would with the tip which made Misty hold her breath with excitement, before Golduck jammed the whole nine inch thing inside of her, causing Misty to moan and cum instantly. Golduck began with a fast motion, moving back and forth as his cock went in and out of the vagina and his hips slammed against her ass. Misty felt the pleasure throughout her body, her inner walls rubbed by the hot hard cock inside of her, while her breasts bounced up and down from the trusting. Her beck drools like a waterfall of drool and her eyes became empty as the other Golduck's red jewels began to glow again. I wonder what they are about to do to her? "You're really enjoying this arnt you?" said the mysterious voice in her head again. "YES!" She said in thought. "THIS FEELS SOOOOOO GOOD!" "You want this feeling forever? Do you want to give up everything human about yes?" Say no Misty and then run. "ABSOLUTLY! I DON'T CARE ABOUT MY OLD LIFE ANYMORE! I JUST WANT THIS FOREVER!" Stop lying to yourself and run. "Then repeat after me." "OKAY!" Guys... It's Déjà vu time! Misty's head started to clear of thought, memories were vanishing and commands were the replacement as her mind began to rewrite itself as she was cumming multiple times. "You are not a human." "I AM NOT A HUMAN!" "You are a Pokemon, a special Psyduck shaped like a human." "I AM A POKEMON! A SPECIAL PSYDUCK SHAPED LIKE A HUMAN!" "You are very dumb and clumsy like a Psyduck." "I AM VERY DUMB AND CLUMSY LIKE A PSYDUCK!" "Your name isn't Misty, your name is Psyduck." "MY NAME ISNT MISTY, MY NAME IS PSYDUCK!" "Your only purpose in life is to pleasure and be pleasured by the Golduck." "MY ONLY PURPOSE IN LIFE IS TO PLEASURE AND BE PLEASURED!" "Fucking is the best feeling ever." "FUCKING IS THE BEST FEELING EVER!" "And Golduck cum is your favorite." "GOLDUCK CUM IS MY FAVORITE!" "You know nothing about humans and don't even care for them. You can't even speak human." "I KNOW NOTHING ABOUT HUMAAAANS AND DON'T CARE FOR THEM! I CAN'T EVEN SPEAK HUMAN!" "Humans are bad, sex and the Golduck are your hobbies and family." "PSYDUCK, PSY DUCK PSY PSY PSYDUCK!" It really do feel like I seen something like this before. Good girl, now cum, cum once more to engrave those words into your mind and receive your reward!" "PSY PSY PSY PSY PSY PSY PSY PSYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!" Came Misty. As she collapsed on the rocky ground, her reward became clear. Her mind was now blank, with on the commands within her thoughts. She felts the zip close up on its own, and the metal dissolve into latex, ensuring there was no wake out now. As the cool latex suit tightened even more, it no longer felt like a suit to Misty, but now a second skin, her own skin as far as she was concerned. She felt a heavy weight on her chest as her breasts grew three cup sizes up, now the size of two basketballs, and her ass and hip grow and widened, giving Misty a sexy hourglass figure she would love. A short rest later, she stood up getting ready for the next piece of action, while getting used to her new breast weight. Two Golduck walked towards Misty, one in front one behind. Misty knelled down to allow the Golduck in front to insert his rod into her pussy, while the other shoved his own right up her asshole. If Misty thought one cock inside her was amazing, two felt like heaven. And zero of them inside her is like hell The night soon became morning, and the former human now Psyduck girl fucked around with all the Golduck in any position they could think of. Cum and her own juices dripped out of her holes and beak as well as cum from her body from the Golduck that jerked off onto her. And yet she showed no displeasure, the bitch in heat wanting more from the Golduck and ready for any position. Three women entered the scene, shocked at the sight of their sister degrading herself as the Golduck's bitch, whoring her body off for their and her desire. Could it be that someone will save her in the fic. "Oh my god!" said Daisy, shocked with disbelief. "What have they done to her?" said Violet, hands over her mouth and widened eyes. "Misty?" Lily called over to her sister. "Misty, we're here to save you." Yes they are now going to be heroes. Misty stopped what she was doing and looked at her sister. She was angry, not because they came, she did not recognize them as her sister, but because they were humans interrupting her "fun". Humans were bad, that's what her new mindset told her, they had to go away. "What's wrong? Doesn't she recognize us?" asked Daisy. "Misty, are you okay?" "PSY PSYDUCK!" Misty replied angrily, almost like a bark. "Does she...think she's a Psyduck?" asked Lily. "In that case, we better act with cation." said Daisy, holding a Pokeball. And now it time to snap her out of it by killing the Golduck that caused the mind control. Before the trio of sisters could act, the red Golduck jewels began to glow bright. The Golduck had enough of this foolishness. "Those lights..." said Violet. "Careful!" warned Daisy. "They must be trying to hypnotize us!" "Argh, what's happening to my clothes?" asked a panicky Lily. The sisters looked down at their clothes, which were beginning to change colour and expand all over their bodies, a familiar yellow colour. Oh no it look like it game over and now going to be up to Ash to save the day "NO!" Scream Daisy. "THEY'RE TURNING US...INTO PSY..." The girls feel to the floor trying to rip their clothes off, but rather then rip, the clothes strached and snapped back onto the body as it now became a more rubbery latex martial. Skirts fused with tops, underwear vanished into the latex as it expanded all other their legs and arms, eating up socks and shoes, and fusing fingers and toes into webbed hands and feet. "We're trapped!" cried Violet. "I can't get it off!" "Oh god, I'm feeling weird." cried Lily. "I'm feeling...aroused by those...Golducks..." "Nooo...can't give...in...must f-f-igh...o-o-obey." said Daisy, losing her mind. Or maybe Daisy's willpower will overcome and she will be the hero...like America. Their bodies were now covered from neck to toe, and now the latex was making its way up their heads, swallowing their last bit of human appearance as their minds began to be reprogrammed with the same commands previously given to Misty. Ok nevermind that we will now need a new hero. Pretty faces and gorgeous hair was now trapped within and replaced with yellow latex and three rubber black hairs. Two Psyduck eyes appeared on each of the girls, like goggles only the human eyes remained hidden, but the girls could still see. A large beak grew from the mouth area, connecting to jaw and upper lip. As the transformation completed, the girls took up to attention, their minds now lost in the hypnotic spell cast upon them. Nipples now erect as they'd ever been and pussies dripping with juices. "Psyduck?" said Daisy. "Psyduck." said Violet. "Psyduck!" said Lily. At that moment, Misty smiled. No longer was she the only human shaped Psyduck, now she had three duckling sisters to enjoy the pleasure with. The three new Psyduck girls ran towards the lake, dived in, and swam to the now crowded rock inland to get the party started. Guess I was wrong at the start of this mock...this is where we get this party started because this nightmare is almost over. So from that day onwards, the four girls had a routine that involved around sleeping, fucking, eating, fucking some more, a quick swim, then fucking into the night before all parties fell asleep, and then the routine would repeat the next day. They never tired of this way of life, it was like heaven for all those involved, and for every Officer Jenny searching for the Sensational Sister and Cerulean Gym Leader, and every lost female trainer, there were more Psyduck girls added to the tribe. Look like it is going to be up to Ash or another male. Even male trainers were converted into Psyduck girls, after the success of turning Ash Ketchum into a blonde busty girl dubbed Ashley. Guess Ash did try to save the day but in the end failed and became Ashley again. I am starting to think the the author have a thing for "Ashley" or something. As overcrowding became a problem, other Pokemon were enlisted by Hypnosis to construct an expansion to the lake and rock island. The lake kept getting bigger and bigger as the months went by, to the point where there was nothing left of the forest. The giant lake was like a huge crowded swimming pool of Psyduck girls and Golduck, happily swimming, fucking, sucking and many other activities to this haven. No matter how many girls became Psyducks, they all kept their original bust and butt sizes. Misty was the only one with the humongous breasts and butt, for she was like a queen to them, a queen of the Psyducks. At least now, Misty was close to her old friend, now and forever...or until someone who had not get turn in to a Psyduck saves the day. The End Well I hope you enjoyed my first mock. This post has been edited by Kirby2000: Apr 18 2011, 10:05 AM -------------------- ![]() The anime adaptation of that Naruto fanfiction where Tobi comes up a a surefire plan to get the reminding tailed beast aka sexy no jutsu. (The scene you see above is Tobi showing Deidara (Who don't approve of the plan.) that the sexy no jutsu can work with the mask on.) Forums Quotes QUOTE (Screaming_Soulcatcher @ Mar 13 2011, 08:06 PM) I figure a sex scene in DBZ would take twelve episodes and a planet blowing up to complete |
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Apr 16 2011, 06:30 AM
Good job, guys, it saves me some pain. Also, you may as well face facts: There are no heroes in these things. Everyone ends up fucking everyone else, then The End.
Unless, of course, America is involved.
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Apr 16 2011, 07:01 AMQUOTE (YTB @ Apr 16 2011, 09:30 AM) Good job, guys, it saves me some pain. Also, you may as well face facts: There are no heroes in these things. Everyone ends up fucking everyone else, then The End. Unless, of course, America is involved. ![]() Thank and also I was more of referring to this America. But I like that motivators. Edit:I did a bit more reserch on laprasking and found out that he is indeed an Ashley fan as seen by this group he made. This post has been edited by Kirby2000: Apr 16 2011, 07:16 AM -------------------- ![]() The anime adaptation of that Naruto fanfiction where Tobi comes up a a surefire plan to get the reminding tailed beast aka sexy no jutsu. (The scene you see above is Tobi showing Deidara (Who don't approve of the plan.) that the sexy no jutsu can work with the mask on.) Forums Quotes QUOTE (Screaming_Soulcatcher @ Mar 13 2011, 08:06 PM) I figure a sex scene in DBZ would take twelve episodes and a planet blowing up to complete |
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![]() BOOP! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 402 Joined: 2-March 11 From: Smalbany Member No.: 447 Gender: Female |
Apr 16 2011, 09:08 AM
Most of these fics are all the same, I realized, except for different names and locations. Laprasking must have some check-list he crosses off when he makes new stories.
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![]() Also known as FDR ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Members Posts: 1,338 Joined: 12-February 10 From: Some place you've probably never been to Member No.: 329 Gender: Male |
Apr 16 2011, 11:55 AM
Let's see, someone turning into a female version of something else... Check. Insane characters that want to stick something up someone else's ass... Check. Total disregard for logic and proper grammar... Check.
I can only assume this next piece of crap, called "Ashley's Month", fits this criteria perfectly. This one looks long, so it looks like we're in for a very bumpy ride. Ashley's Month Chapter 1 "Stupid!" Ash said to himself, as he was leaving Celedon City. "Stupid stupid stupid!" I agree, Ash. laprasking IS stupid. Ash was angry with himself over the remarks he made at Erika and her girls. Because of this, the next month would be an embarrassing nightmare, especially if anyone knew it was him in the outfit. SOMEBODY KILL ME NOW Ash stomped his way out of the city and onwards to Cerulean City. Our story begins 24 hours earlier. Ash had just arrived at Celedon City and he was already lost, trying to find the next Gym in order to earn his next badge. The Town Map certainly wasn't any help, since in only had the locations of the Cities and Towns, not the actually layout of the place (Red, Blue, Yellow series of games anyway…). Ash decided to wonder into a store to ask for directions, a decision he would later regret. Asking questions always leads to trouble in laprasking fics. He walked over to a girl at the cash register. "May I help you young sir?" she asked in her friendly voice. Ash caught the smell of something, a smell he wasn't too fond of. "Are you looking for some perfume for your girlfriend perhaps?" That was the smell, perfume. "What, that stuff?" said Ash in disbelief. "No way! It's a lowsy rip off!" lolwut Ash was feeling over confident with himself after the easy win at the last Gym. Normally, he would not make remarks like that unless he was feeling really cocky and this happened to be the case. "Sir, will you please not make such remarks about our product." asked the girl angrily, trying not to get angry with a customer. "It's not just YOUR perfume, its all perfume that makes me want to throw up! I don't see why stupid girls waste money on that stuff!" Well you don't tell them that, dumbass. "Sir, I may have to ask you to leave." "Fine, No idea why I came in here!" *Facepalm* Ash stormed off out of the store. As he did, the girl noticed her manager came out from her office. "Oh, I m sorry Mistress! Dud you see that?" "Yes." Said the manager. "That boy had no right coming in here and making remarks about our perfume like that." "Oooh, I hope a truck hits him on the way out!" I hope she feels bad when Ash gets hit by a truck. "Don't worry. Chances are, he's a Pokemon Trainer looking for the Gym. I ll make she he gets what he deserves…" Ash's hate for perfume started when he was very young. Every time he went out with his mother and they would go to a perfume shop, Ash would always be asked to smell the perfume his mom tried on. Usually, the perfume stores reeked of the stuff. Young Ash always moaned whenever they were going into a perfume store for 5 minutes, which felt like forever to him, as it usually would do for most young children. Today, he associated girls with perfume, hence why he did not like either of them. Mental scars are fun. At his age, girls were not in his interest and would probably not be for years to come, but because the role of perfume tester he played as a young lad, he did not care for girls one bit. Later, Ash decided it was getting late and decided to head to the Pokemon Centre for sleep. The next day, he finally found the Gym. As he walked closer to the Gym, that familiar smell from yesterday returned. It got stronger the closer he got. The Gym can't be full of girls could it, he thought to himself? Once he entered, his fears were confirmed. It was a Gym full of women and young girls. They all look at Ash with a look of disgust, as if they knew what occurred yesterday. "I ve come to face the Gym Leader!" Ash demanded. He wasn't feeling over the moon after yesterday's encounter at the Perfume Store. Over the moon? Wha? "Fetch the Mistress!" one girl said to another, and not a moment too soon, the Gym Leader appeared. "So, you must be the young boy who dislikes perfume correct?" she asked. "Wait, how did you know about that?" "Oh, I happened to be the manger of that perfume store, as well as the Celedon Gym Leader." "Uh oh…" "Tell me, why do you hate perfume so much?" "It's a waste of money! Girls only buy it to make themselves smell nice and stuff!" "And what's so wrong with girls may I ask?" Well in laprasking fics, two thirds of them are insane, and the rest end up getting things rammed up their asses. "I ve got no interest in them. They just go around making themselves look and smell beautiful and waste time making flower arrangements or something girly like that!" At this point, the girls yelled insults at Ash. "SEXIST PIG!" "YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF!" WHITE POWER! Oh, wait. Wrong group of nuts. "Whatever, can I just have my Gym Battle?" "I m sorry you feel that way. However, I will not battle you." "What? But according to the Pokemon League rules, a Gym Leader must accept all challengers! You can't back out!" "Who says I m backing out? Gym Leaders can make their own rules for their gym, and since you ve insulted me and my girls, you don't get to battle me." Is Ash was smart, he'd report these fuckers. Of course, everyone in these things is an idiot, so we know what's going to happen next. "WHHHHHHHHAAAAAT? PLEASE BATTLE ME! I NEED YOUR BADGE TO GET INTO THE POKEMON LEAGUE!" "You should of thought of that before you insulted the great Mistress Erika!" said one of the girls. The girls started walking away from Ash. Ash was down on his knees begging. "Please." He cried. "I need this battle more then anything. My dream is to be a Pokemon Master, and I can't do that unless I battle you. Please battle me…" The girls weren't lissening, continuing to walk away. "Please! I ll do anything…" Oh shit. Those were the words Erika was hoping to hear. "Anything you say?" Ash got a sudden chill once she said that. He had a bad feeling about what he said. "…y-y-yes." Ash is so fucking stupid... Erika smiled. «Well then, here's the deal. You have to give up the next month and assume a new identity during that month. You will dress how we say you dress and you will live how we say you live. Do you understand?" "I-I guess." "Right, lets get started. Take off your clothes please. Ash slowly dropped his bag and began unpeeling layers of clothes. Eventully, he was only in his boxer shorts. "Everything please." Said Erika. SHES A PEDOPHILE "What?" said a horrified Ash. "But everyone will see…" "Do it or no battle!" Ash very slowly slid his boxers down until they were down to his feet. All the girls giggled as he stepped out of them, covering his manhood up. "Oh my." Said a girl. "He's still just a boy!" The girls then walked up to him. "Right, put these one." Said Erika, holding up some pink Pikachu panties. ![]() Ash did as he was told, even though he was embarrassed by putting on girl's panties, especially pink ones. "Ahh, cute. Okay, lets continue. Erika got a matching pink bra. The girls helped Ash put it on. The slipped some cups into the bra. "These will act as your breasts." Informed Erika. "You will only be allowed to take them out when you bath or shower." Erika attached something round Ash's neck. It was like a strap collar with a piece of metal on the middle. "Say something" said Erika. "What?" said Ash. His voice sounded different, like that of a girl's. "What happened to my voice?" ![]() "That collar modifies your voice to make it sound more feminine. It also has a sensor, so we ll know if you are breaking any of our rules. It's also waterproof, so you can keep it on during showers. You must keep this on at all times. "Right, dress next." Said Erika. The girl put on an orange dress onto Ash. Next, they put on some red shoes onto his feet. "Hmm, not the best of outfits, but it ll do for now." Said Erika. "You may buy more dresses if you please during your month." "Just don't buy anything too revealing or people will know what you really are!" giggled one of the girls. That's not funny. "Nearly done." Said Erika. "Fetch the head cap." One of the girls went and came back with what looked like a cap you d wear if you were swimming, only it was skin coloured. The girl put the cap onto Ash's head, covering all his hair. "This cap that we ve put on will not come off no matter what you do. It will remain stuck on your head until your month is up." Fuck science. It used to do useful stuff like cure polio and make bombs. Now it does shit like this. "Its kind of uncomfortable." Said Ash. "Don't worry, it will feel fine in a few moments." All the girls looked at their work. "Well girl, what hair colour would you say he is?" asked Erika. "I d say he's more a blond." Said one girl. "Yes, lets try blond!" said another. "Let's have a ribbon too!" said a third girl. "Couldn't agree more. Fetch a blond wig with a pink ribbon." Something tells me they've done this before. One girl left and came back with a blond wig and a pink ribbon. The girl placed the wig onto Ash's head, on top of the cap. She then proceeded to putting the ribbon onto the wig. "Just let the cap, the wig cannot be taken off." Said Erika. "It reacts the to the cap by sticking onto it. It will come off in a month along with the cap." The girls looked at their work once more. "Beautiful." Said one girl. "Outstanding" said another "Final step girls!" said Erika. "You know what to do." Yup, they've done this before. All the girls took out perfume and make up. Ash looked horrified as they stepped closed to him. They all pinned him down to the floor as they applied make up onto Ash's face and spraying him with perfume. Once the girls had stopped, you could hardly tell Ash was a boy. "Tell me, what's your name?" asked Erika. "Ash." "For the next month onwards, your name will be Ashley. You will live by your female identity throughout the month. You may travel the Kanto region as you please, but return to this Gym once your month is up. If you take off anything I said you couldn't take off, then you will be banned from battling this Gym for life and will never take part in the Pokemon League ever. Do you understand?" What if he dies? "Erm, Yes." Said a shy Ashley. The girls took away Ash's clothes and bag. "We will keep hold of your things until your month is up. For now, you may have this." Erika handed Ashley a pink shoulder bag. "This bag contains a purse with some money for living expenses, 2 Pokeballs with Pokemon inside, don't worry they are at a strong level so you ll be able to defend yourself if you run into any wild Pokemon, a nightee and some spare bra and panties." Free stuff FTW. Ashley put the shoulder bag on. "Well, see you in a month" said Erika as two girl escorted Ashley out of the Gym. "Wait! I can't go outside looking like this!" panicked Ashley. "People will…" "Don't you want to enter the Pokemon League?" said Erika. "…Yes but…" "Good, then you'll have no troubles! Bye!" Ash and the girls got outside and the girls went back into the Gym, leaving Ashley on his own. Ash's face turned bright red as he noticed people walking about. If anyone discovered he was a boy in drag, he d never live it down. He would be the laughing stock of Pallet Town for the rest of his days. Yeah, that sucks. Is this hsit over yet? "Hey little girl, are you alright?" asked a Officer Jenny, concerned by her red face. "Erm, yes! Fine!" said Ashley. "Gotta go!" Ashley began stomping his way off. "Wait, this doesn't seem very lady like." Thought Ashley. So Ashley began walking normally. On the way, his notice some girls his age walking in front of him and tried to mimic exactly how the were walking. Ashley decided to leave Celedon City, as he held bad memories of Erika and her girls. Cerulean City seems like a good place to start, as it wasn't not far and a small city, unlike Saffron, which was huge. Just as Ashley headed out of town, a thought came to him. "Wait a sec, I could of just entered the Johto League!" Derp. With that, Ashley grew angry at himself. He could just give up now, but then he would be dressed as a girl for nothing. Ashley started stomping again. "Stupid, stupid!" he said to himself. To Be Continued Probably not, since there isn't a second chapter and this was published in 2008. It's probably for the best, anyways. -------------------- "If you want a vision of the future, imagine a boot stamping on a human face - forever."
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Apr 16 2011, 12:09 PM
I really want to know Laprasking's obsession with turning dudes into girls, and turning girls into sex addicted Pokemon/animals. He just seems like he has some... mental issues or something, considering all this shit he writes.
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Apr 16 2011, 12:45 PMQUOTE (Moose @ Apr 16 2011, 01:08 PM) Most of these fics are all the same, I realized, except for different names and locations. Laprasking must have some check-list he crosses off when he makes new stories. Let's have a drinking game every time he does the same stuff! Actually, that might be a bit much for me to handle. -------------------- ![]() |
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Apr 16 2011, 01:00 PM
You try that and I guarantee your liver will completely shut down before you even get done with the third fic.
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